Scene at a Seed Spitting Contest
a one scene script with Pons and Ned11 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a well penned script which engages the reader in the contest excitement from start to finish. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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This is a well penned script which engages the reader in the contest excitement from start to finish. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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Thanks, MA.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! Okay -- so I had to reference up top for the first few interactions, but I think I have everyone straight now!! ;) :) Absolutely loved this one, Sir Bill, though, I do at times fear for your sanity!! ;) Certainly looking forward to the next! ;) :) Yvette
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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LOL! Okay -- so I had to reference up top for the first few interactions, but I think I have everyone straight now!! ;) :) Absolutely loved this one, Sir Bill, though, I do at times fear for your sanity!! ;) Certainly looking forward to the next! ;) :) Yvette
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Thanks, Yvette.
Comment from judiverse
Yuck! I can't imagine a watermelon seed spitting contest. But I can't stand the hot dog eating contests either. You've really rounded up quite a group of characters. Plan 9 is really surly. If he has such distain for Earth he should go back to where he came from immediately. Ned has at last found something he can shine out. Uncle's monkey at the end is funny. I believe I've seen Mike Rowe on TV. I don't think he's that well known. Does this mean you watch Fox TV? judi
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Yuck! I can't imagine a watermelon seed spitting contest. But I can't stand the hot dog eating contests either. You've really rounded up quite a group of characters. Plan 9 is really surly. If he has such distain for Earth he should go back to where he came from immediately. Ned has at last found something he can shine out. Uncle's monkey at the end is funny. I believe I've seen Mike Rowe on TV. I don't think he's that well known. Does this mean you watch Fox TV? judi
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Looked him up on line
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I'll have to see if he's the guy I'm thinking of. judi
Comment from Earl Corp
This was hilariousI Plan 9 reminds me of Marvin the Martian in the Bugs Bunny cartoons, "Where's the Kaboom, there should be an earth shattering Kaboom. I'd still like to see Plan 9 and Ned go head to head. Good job.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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This was hilariousI Plan 9 reminds me of Marvin the Martian in the Bugs Bunny cartoons, "Where's the Kaboom, there should be an earth shattering Kaboom. I'd still like to see Plan 9 and Ned go head to head. Good job.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Earl. You?re right, I had Marvin in mind.
Comment from Mistydawn
Your script is well-written, interesting, realistic. Your dialogue brought your characters to life. The part about tying one lung behind his back was a nice touch. It showed his ego, confidence that he'd win.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Your script is well-written, interesting, realistic. Your dialogue brought your characters to life. The part about tying one lung behind his back was a nice touch. It showed his ego, confidence that he'd win.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Thank you, MD
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Very interesting scene. The lingo adds another dimension to this humorous script. Appears Plan 9 has other thoughts in mind besides a watermelon seed spitting contest, like destroying a certain "revolving orb of refuge". (BTW, good description of the earth). Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Very interesting scene. The lingo adds another dimension to this humorous script. Appears Plan 9 has other thoughts in mind besides a watermelon seed spitting contest, like destroying a certain "revolving orb of refuge". (BTW, good description of the earth). Well done.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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...and only one injury to a spectator.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
LOL! This is hilarious. I really like "America-loving" Apollo, no doubt a Ruskie spy. And Plan 9 (great movie...hahaha) makes no secret of his plans to destroy Earth. And Ned won! What a nice surprise. About time he didn't fail miserably at something! :)
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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LOL! This is hilarious. I really like "America-loving" Apollo, no doubt a Ruskie spy. And Plan 9 (great movie...hahaha) makes no secret of his plans to destroy Earth. And Ned won! What a nice surprise. About time he didn't fail miserably at something! :)
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Phyllis, for the great review. Yes, Ned has beaten the vagrant, nut, alien, Pallas, and a spitting legend.
Comment from nomi338
Well, I am spit to be tied. Who knew? Looks like old Ned has a measure of talent for something after all. Ned may well prove to be someone of note after all is said and done.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Well, I am spit to be tied. Who knew? Looks like old Ned has a measure of talent for something after all. Ned may well prove to be someone of note after all is said and done.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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He?s the spitting image of a hero. Thanks for reading this, nomi.
Comment from lyenochka
I knew that Ned would be really good at something! Hope he gets to take home the prize as long as Plan 9 doesn't create some catastrophe. I'll assume his misspellings is due to his speech.
"(all contestents spit)" (contestants)
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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I knew that Ned would be really good at something! Hope he gets to take home the prize as long as Plan 9 doesn't create some catastrophe. I'll assume his misspellings is due to his speech.
"(all contestents spit)" (contestants)
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Actually his is the hammer approach to chaos rather than grammar.
Comment from Rippeltina
I literally laughed so much, it was also well written and the picture matched perfectly. You made my day, thank you for the good read and have a good day! :)
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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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I literally laughed so much, it was also well written and the picture matched perfectly. You made my day, thank you for the good read and have a good day! :)
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Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Thanks, Rippeltina, for the great review. Bill
