Ever after
how to choose between the graveyard and the crematorium12 total reviews
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great job with this humorous story about an apartment overlooking a graveyard. The real kicker is the smell of cremation coming from the funeral home. That is much worse than just a graveyard by itself. If this ever comes down to a real life decision, I think you will be well prepared.
Bill
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Great job with this humorous story about an apartment overlooking a graveyard. The real kicker is the smell of cremation coming from the funeral home. That is much worse than just a graveyard by itself. If this ever comes down to a real life decision, I think you will be well prepared.
Bill
Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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This is a true story, we have in Edmonton an apartment building between the graveyard and the crematorium and we wanted to buy a condo that was overlooking the funeral home:) but I didn't like the view:)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
This starts out as a great offering for the contest, but your font is so very small that I cannot strain my eyes through it... if you do decide to enlarge it, let me know and I may have time to look at it again later... Good luck in the contest! :)
Now that I got your --> Now that I have your
fun time to resell the properties --> fun time reselling the properties
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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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This starts out as a great offering for the contest, but your font is so very small that I cannot strain my eyes through it... if you do decide to enlarge it, let me know and I may have time to look at it again later... Good luck in the contest! :)
Now that I got your --> Now that I have your
fun time to resell the properties --> fun time reselling the properties
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Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Hi Yvette and thank you for stopping by. I have changed the font and thank you for letting me know that it was hard to read:) I hope the 14 helps. I personally prefer the big fonts too, but I had people complaining in the past.
