I'm Writing Santa!
Syllable count 5-7-510 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
"Sincere sillyness." Love it. Your alliteration of the letter "s" in this 5-7-5 is great. I like the glittering illustration and whimsy of your piece. Christmas is right around the corner. Marilyn
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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"Sincere sillyness." Love it. Your alliteration of the letter "s" in this 5-7-5 is great. I like the glittering illustration and whimsy of your piece. Christmas is right around the corner. Marilyn
Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi Marilyn! Thank you. May you have Happy Holidays with your loved ones. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 about believing in Santa gives us hope for the things we really like to have. I think the child within us will always believe in Santa who handing out gifts at the Christmas tree.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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A very well-written 5-7-5 about believing in Santa gives us hope for the things we really like to have. I think the child within us will always believe in Santa who handing out gifts at the Christmas tree.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Hi! Yes, Sandra... There is a Santa Claus.
Thank you :)
Comment from Joan E.
I am glad to learn the U.S. Post Office is encouraging letters to Santa by providing a postal address. I enjoyed your alliteration of "s's" plus decorations, and I hope your wish for "stylish gifts" comes true. Best wishes in the 5-7-5 Contest- Joan
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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I am glad to learn the U.S. Post Office is encouraging letters to Santa by providing a postal address. I enjoyed your alliteration of "s's" plus decorations, and I hope your wish for "stylish gifts" comes true. Best wishes in the 5-7-5 Contest- Joan
Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Hi Joan! They have been doing that for as way back as I can remember. It's a nice source for season hope. My childhood friends wrote Santa. I haven't yet. Maybe this year I could write Santa. You're never too old. You're nice. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia
Go for it! It's good to hope and may your wishes come true. More hugs- Joan
Comment from royowen
I've been trying that for years Alicia, for some years now, he never brings me a Ferrari or a Rolls, or a diamond tipped pen, he only brings me what I can afford...trinkets. Well done My friend, great write, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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I've been trying that for years Alicia, for some years now, he never brings me a Ferrari or a Rolls, or a diamond tipped pen, he only brings me what I can afford...trinkets. Well done My friend, great write, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Hi Roy! Insurance on a Ferrari might be ridiculously high, and it probably uses the more expensive gasoline. Sometimes the gifts received are a blessing in disguise. Thank you. God bless you :)
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I?d sell it and buy an ordinary one to pay the insurance heh heh
Comment from tfawcus
This is the kind of silliness that I like! I hope that your letter is near the top of the pile when Santa starts compiling his lists and loading up his sleigh!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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This is the kind of silliness that I like! I hope that your letter is near the top of the pile when Santa starts compiling his lists and loading up his sleigh!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Hi Tony! You're the best. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Rippeltina
I'm already feeling in the mood for christmas, thank you for that wonderful poem. When the day comes I hope you have a great family time, have a good day always. :)
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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I'm already feeling in the mood for christmas, thank you for that wonderful poem. When the day comes I hope you have a great family time, have a good day always. :)
Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Hi! I'm still a single lady. Thank you :)
Comment from oliver818
This is a Nice poem, I enjoyed it. It's short and sweet and I like the feeling. It's fast paced and fun. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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This is a Nice poem, I enjoyed it. It's short and sweet and I like the feeling. It's fast paced and fun. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from country ranch writer
Nice work up and presentation for this cute display.seems Santa is going to fill my stocking with coal for the attitude I have right now. Have good holidays.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Nice work up and presentation for this cute display.seems Santa is going to fill my stocking with coal for the attitude I have right now. Have good holidays.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Hi Barb! You'll be okay. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from giraffmang
Oh dear, looks like it's that time of the year again... lol
Well this is spot on syllable count-wise and it's a fun little entry.
best of luck
GMG
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Oh dear, looks like it's that time of the year again... lol
Well this is spot on syllable count-wise and it's a fun little entry.
best of luck
GMG
Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Hi! Thank you. Hearts & hugs :)
Comment from lyenochka
A cute little 5-7-5, Alicia! Do kids write Santa anymore? Good use of all the s-word alliteration! Hope you are blessed in all your Christmas celebrations and best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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A cute little 5-7-5, Alicia! Do kids write Santa anymore? Good use of all the s-word alliteration! Hope you are blessed in all your Christmas celebrations and best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Hi Helen! Well, the post office still has an address. I'm sure they do. An envelope cost more than an email, but it's probably both forms. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia
