When silence prevails
This poem is about life and how precious it is4 total reviews
Comment from Alex Rosel
It's usually hard to state the profound with few words, but I think you've achieved that here. I like the simplicity of this poem. And the refrain "When silence prevails" further taps into the simplicity {thumbs up}.
The black text on a background of red wouldn't be my choice; it's a visual trope for evil, and I don't think that connotation is befitting here. Just saying...
Thank you for the post.
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It's usually hard to state the profound with few words, but I think you've achieved that here. I like the simplicity of this poem. And the refrain "When silence prevails" further taps into the simplicity {thumbs up}.
The black text on a background of red wouldn't be my choice; it's a visual trope for evil, and I don't think that connotation is befitting here. Just saying...
Thank you for the post.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
I send my prayers her way and take heart as all children are embraced in heaven's love upon departure from this earthly plane. This is beautifully penned and brings to mind how I feel during morning and evening meditation and contemplative prayer. It is when we are still and silent that God and His angels speak most clearly to us. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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I send my prayers her way and take heart as all children are embraced in heaven's love upon departure from this earthly plane. This is beautifully penned and brings to mind how I feel during morning and evening meditation and contemplative prayer. It is when we are still and silent that God and His angels speak most clearly to us. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
Comment from oliver818
This is a very beautiful poem, especially considering your notes about what inspired you to write it. That's so sad. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
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This is a very beautiful poem, especially considering your notes about what inspired you to write it. That's so sad. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
Comment from moonsunrise
I love this uplifting poem. Yes, life is so precious your words reflect the beauty of it. Silence, yes, silence is golden. These are the times I feel so spiritually connected to the universe and Our Heavenly Father's love.
This is a wonderful, heartfelt poem creating such an awareness of the importance of silence to the one reading the poem.
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I love this uplifting poem. Yes, life is so precious your words reflect the beauty of it. Silence, yes, silence is golden. These are the times I feel so spiritually connected to the universe and Our Heavenly Father's love.
This is a wonderful, heartfelt poem creating such an awareness of the importance of silence to the one reading the poem.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
