Dreams Come Alive
A nocturnal nonet.22 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! What a gorgeous nonet. I like how you start with the big wide beautiful universe, transpose them into the beauty of our dreams and aspirations that are within our minds. Wishing you the best in the contest!!
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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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Wow! What a gorgeous nonet. I like how you start with the big wide beautiful universe, transpose them into the beauty of our dreams and aspirations that are within our minds. Wishing you the best in the contest!!
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Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for your positive response!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I like the fluidity of your ending :"planets plummet bright galaxies will shimmer within me." Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and good luck with your next writing.
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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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I like the fluidity of your ending :"planets plummet bright galaxies will shimmer within me." Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and good luck with your next writing.
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Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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Thanks so much for your positive response to my nonet!
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You are welcome
