Comment from Sylvia Page

Excellent

This is getting very complicated for the investigators. So much so, it confuses me as well. I wonder who is responsible for the attack on Jessica in the hospital. Well written
Regards
Sylvia

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019

Thank you for your kind review. I'm sorry you're so confused. In reality, Barry shot Paul then planted the evidence. Jeremy beat up Jeff, through him in the trunk. Then hit Tony with Paul's car. Jeff and Tony are actually innocent for once. You'll find out who attacked Jessica in the final chapter. It should be posted tomorrow afternoon.
There's also a pleasant surprise in store. I hope you'll like it.
Thank you again for all your support, your friendship, it means a lot to me, take care.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

After all murder is the matter, nothing silly, everything is grave and mysterious, truth is afar, needs to be dug through wise mode and manner, truth has to reveal, and it reveals; well said, well done.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019

Thank you so much for your kind review and your continuous support it is always greatly appreciated. The police only think they've uncovered the truth but with nothing to support Joe's theories, they have to go where the evidence takes them. There's one chapter left. I hope to make it an emotional ending. I hope you stick around to find out what it is.
Thank you again for continuing to reading my story, take care.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

So the plot is thickening, as in TV dramas and murder/crime mysteries, I can never work out and tie the loose ends of the mystery together, so I tend to choose the most innocent of the possible suspects, and it's amazing how many times I'm right! Well done, good episode, that ends in the release of Barry and Jeremy. Good job, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019

Thank you for reading my story. It does seem like the least likely suspect is the one who did it you're right about that. Guess, I need to write a story to shake your logic up. Keep you guessing to the end. Hmmm. Can you hear the squeaky wheels turning?
There's one more chapter to this story. I have to make good on a promise. I hope to make it the most emotional one I've written yet.
Thank you again for all your help, support, and friendship. It always means a lot to me, take care.

reply by royowen on 13-Nov-2019

Well done

Comment from Robert Zimmerman

Excellent

Hey Mistydawn. In the story, the continued interrogation showed something interesting to me. I like your narrative about phone spoofing. It added a twist in the story that was unexpected. Robert

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019

Thank you so much for reading my chapter. I'm glad you enjoyed it. That you liked the bit about spoofing. It's actually quite scary what you can find out on the internet. It's a database full of how to.
Thank you again for all your help, support, friendship, and encouragement. It always means a lot to me, take care.

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 13-Nov-2019

You're welcome

Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Hi Misty. It's getting more complicated by the minute. Who has done what and when is becoming more and more of a mystery. But at last it appears the doubt has been sown in the police's mind. Now, what next? Well written and great dialogue. All best. Ulla xx

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019

Thank you so much for your marvelous review. I am very honored. The officers have a few minor details to sort out, Tony's connection to the death but overall they're done. The next chapter has to do with a promise I made to one of my characters in the midst of a disagreement. Don't worry, I know they're fictional, only exists in my mind. I hope to make it a very emotional ending.
Thank you again for such a marvelous review. All your help, support, and friendship. It always means so much to me, take care.

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Maybe the eventually will get things worked out and find out the truth. Such a mess going on with everyone accusing wrong person. Time for them to wise up. Just because they don't like the guy they don't have to assume he is guilty.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019

Thank you so much for reading my chapter. You're right, Joe seems to have it out for Jeremy and Barry and Jerry for Jeff. This tunnel vision may lead them down the wrong path.
Thank you again for all your help, support and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

I'm learning a lot on this site and I've notice the sign of a good writer is to use gestures which we would notice in real life: "Joe runs his fingers through his hair " In case a reader was thinking of taking a break from the story, you've recaptured them. They'll be waiting for the next chapter. Great work.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019

Thank you so much for your encouraging review and compliment. I will remember your suggestion moving forward. I've improved since I started here, but I still have a long way to go.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement, and friendship. It means the world to me, take care.

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Released again. Jerry gets away with murder. Not actual murder. Someone else committed the crime, but Jeremy seems to be untouchable. Your story is well written.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019

Thank you for your kind review. I'm glad my story has continued to hold your interest. Yeah, Jeremy is a lucky guy, Not being charged with attempted vehicular homicide, kidnapping, assault and battery. I just hope his crime spree is done.
Thank you again for reading my story, for all your help, support, and friendship. It means a lot to me, take care.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Mistydawn
From what I just finished reading Chapter 15 of you book Pushed Too Far. Is excellent of how you wrote of how Joe and Jerry uncovers the truth. and how they are going to find out what was the fight about between the two suspects.

Gert

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019

Thank you so much for such a kind review. I'm glad you're still enjoying the story. There's one final chapter to go. I do hope you stick around for the emotional ending.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement, and friendship. It means the world to me, take care.

reply by Gert sherwood on 13-Nov-2019

Mistydawn you are so welcome.
I will be wailing for the final chapter.

Gert

Comment from Therese Caron

Excellent

I am entering your book at this stage so I don't really know what's going on, but I have to admit that it grabbed my attention immediately. Very exciting story. I want to read the beginning so I know who is doing what and why. Good writing, clear and concise.

Terry Caron

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019

Thank you so much for your kind review and your encouraging words. I'm glad you enjoyed it despite not knowing what has previously taken place.
Thank you again for your kind review It means a lot to me, take care.