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Oh, The Shame of It All

What to do with an inept owner...

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Comment from Alex Rosel
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Ha, ha! I love this piece. It's full of humor {thumbs up}.

But, Sweetheart! -- Is "swearheart" really a proper noun here?

Red just screams 'Chihuahua', does it not? -- LOL!

I must get around to contributing to the Locate club's challenges...

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this one and that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward out there and take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a lot of fun Yvette and this colour certainly does suit this hedgehog on a leash! But fitting it wrongly has certainly upset this little character! I loved your humorous interpretation of this picture Yvette, you made me laugh, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    LOL! So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog', Dolly -- shhhhh, don't tell, but I had a bit of fun with him, too! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward up there and take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Bucketlist
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That must be where the expression "flea bag" originated ha ha. As per usual, your creativity of personification left me with a giggle. A fashionista hedgehog indeed. They get a bad rap, but I like these cute little critters. Thanks for sharing!
Hugs, Trisha

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    LOL! So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog', Trisha -- and, yeah, I had fun with it! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward up there and take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Angie Dent
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A great flash fiction entry for the competition. I wonder what came first, the short story or the hedgehog picture? Very cute and best of luck for the comp.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    The pic is part of the 'Flash Fiction' club here on FanStory, Angie -- be sure to pop over on the SOCIAL listing and click on clubs to see others. ;) :) And I'm glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog' and that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward out there and take care! ;) Yvette
reply by Angie Dent on 13-Nov-2019
    Thank you for the tip - I will have a look. Good luck. Angie
Comment from JudyE
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Poor little hedgehog. :( You have to feel for pets sometimes, don't you? Humans really must test their patience at times. Fancy putting his bell on sideways. Tut tut.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    LOL! So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog', Judy -- and, yeah, I had fun with it! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward down over there and take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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Humorous composition here from the hedgehog's point of view after being fitted with a new harness and jingle bell in a fetching turquoise blue ensemble that beats Chihuahua-red hands down. Or is it paws down? Cute approach to a writing prompt.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    LOL! So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog', Crystie -- and, yeah, I had a bit of fun with it! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward up there and take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sally Law
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I like your fresh take on a fashion flunkie. A hedgehog needs very little to spice things up. God well-equipped them. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes in the challenge, Yvette. ;)
Sally xo

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    LOL! So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog', Lady Sal -- and, yeah, the blonde over here definitely had a bit of fun with it! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward out there and take care! ;) Yvette
reply by Sally Law on 12-Nov-2019
    You are most welcome. I'm behind with you, dear, and I promise to catch up. I've had shingles again and my most recent Blind Girl was difficult to finish. The antivirals are so strong they make me sleepy. I've napped all week! That's usually my FanStory time. :) I hope to catch up better today and tomorrow. Sal xo
Comment from poetwatch
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What a shame, a small and gritty animal on a leash with it on backwards. Yvette, next time you take your pet for a walk take some advice... listen to what it says. :) You come out with some funnies once in a while. Thank you for sharing. :)

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    LOL! So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog', Jose -- and, yeah, I had a little bit of fun with it! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward up there and take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Tinklinklinkling
Oh, the humiliation... Just shoot me now!

LOL! This is hilarious. I love the personality you gave this little guy. He's my new hero! Good job! :)

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    LOL! So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog', Phyllis -- and, yeah, I had fun with it! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward out there and take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Yvette. Nothing is more attractive than a hedgehog with a teal harness. If there is something more precious, I certainly don't have any idea what it would be. :))) Z

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    LOL! So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog', Z -- and, yeah, I had fun with it! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward out there and take care! ;) Yvette
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 11-Nov-2019
    People don't smile at my stuff anymore. I'm still smiling though 😊. Z