Oh, The Shame of It All
What to do with an inept owner...37 total reviews
Comment from Alex Rosel
Ha, ha! I love this piece. It's full of humor {thumbs up}.
But, Sweetheart! -- Is "swearheart" really a proper noun here?
Red just screams 'Chihuahua', does it not? -- LOL!
I must get around to contributing to the Locate club's challenges...
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
Ha, ha! I love this piece. It's full of humor {thumbs up}.
But, Sweetheart! -- Is "swearheart" really a proper noun here?
Red just screams 'Chihuahua', does it not? -- LOL!
I must get around to contributing to the Locate club's challenges...
Comment Written 11-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this one and that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward out there and take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a lot of fun Yvette and this colour certainly does suit this hedgehog on a leash! But fitting it wrongly has certainly upset this little character! I loved your humorous interpretation of this picture Yvette, you made me laugh, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
This is a lot of fun Yvette and this colour certainly does suit this hedgehog on a leash! But fitting it wrongly has certainly upset this little character! I loved your humorous interpretation of this picture Yvette, you made me laugh, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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LOL! So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog', Dolly -- shhhhh, don't tell, but I had a bit of fun with him, too! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward up there and take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Bucketlist
That must be where the expression "flea bag" originated ha ha. As per usual, your creativity of personification left me with a giggle. A fashionista hedgehog indeed. They get a bad rap, but I like these cute little critters. Thanks for sharing!
Hugs, Trisha
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
That must be where the expression "flea bag" originated ha ha. As per usual, your creativity of personification left me with a giggle. A fashionista hedgehog indeed. They get a bad rap, but I like these cute little critters. Thanks for sharing!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment Written 11-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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LOL! So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog', Trisha -- and, yeah, I had fun with it! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward up there and take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Angie Dent
A great flash fiction entry for the competition. I wonder what came first, the short story or the hedgehog picture? Very cute and best of luck for the comp.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
A great flash fiction entry for the competition. I wonder what came first, the short story or the hedgehog picture? Very cute and best of luck for the comp.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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The pic is part of the 'Flash Fiction' club here on FanStory, Angie -- be sure to pop over on the SOCIAL listing and click on clubs to see others. ;) :) And I'm glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog' and that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward out there and take care! ;) Yvette
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Thank you for the tip - I will have a look. Good luck. Angie
Comment from JudyE
Poor little hedgehog. :( You have to feel for pets sometimes, don't you? Humans really must test their patience at times. Fancy putting his bell on sideways. Tut tut.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
Poor little hedgehog. :( You have to feel for pets sometimes, don't you? Humans really must test their patience at times. Fancy putting his bell on sideways. Tut tut.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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LOL! So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog', Judy -- and, yeah, I had fun with it! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward down over there and take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Humorous composition here from the hedgehog's point of view after being fitted with a new harness and jingle bell in a fetching turquoise blue ensemble that beats Chihuahua-red hands down. Or is it paws down? Cute approach to a writing prompt.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
Humorous composition here from the hedgehog's point of view after being fitted with a new harness and jingle bell in a fetching turquoise blue ensemble that beats Chihuahua-red hands down. Or is it paws down? Cute approach to a writing prompt.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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LOL! So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog', Crystie -- and, yeah, I had a bit of fun with it! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward up there and take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sally Law
I like your fresh take on a fashion flunkie. A hedgehog needs very little to spice things up. God well-equipped them. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes in the challenge, Yvette. ;)
Sally xo
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
I like your fresh take on a fashion flunkie. A hedgehog needs very little to spice things up. God well-equipped them. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes in the challenge, Yvette. ;)
Sally xo
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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LOL! So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog', Lady Sal -- and, yeah, the blonde over here definitely had a bit of fun with it! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward out there and take care! ;) Yvette
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You are most welcome. I'm behind with you, dear, and I promise to catch up. I've had shingles again and my most recent Blind Girl was difficult to finish. The antivirals are so strong they make me sleepy. I've napped all week! That's usually my FanStory time. :) I hope to catch up better today and tomorrow. Sal xo
Comment from poetwatch
What a shame, a small and gritty animal on a leash with it on backwards. Yvette, next time you take your pet for a walk take some advice... listen to what it says. :) You come out with some funnies once in a while. Thank you for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
What a shame, a small and gritty animal on a leash with it on backwards. Yvette, next time you take your pet for a walk take some advice... listen to what it says. :) You come out with some funnies once in a while. Thank you for sharing. :)
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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LOL! So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog', Jose -- and, yeah, I had a little bit of fun with it! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward up there and take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Oh, the humiliation... Just shoot me now!
LOL! This is hilarious. I love the personality you gave this little guy. He's my new hero! Good job! :)
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
Tinklinklinkling
Oh, the humiliation... Just shoot me now!
LOL! This is hilarious. I love the personality you gave this little guy. He's my new hero! Good job! :)
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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LOL! So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog', Phyllis -- and, yeah, I had fun with it! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward out there and take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Yvette. Nothing is more attractive than a hedgehog with a teal harness. If there is something more precious, I certainly don't have any idea what it would be. :))) Z
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
Yvette. Nothing is more attractive than a hedgehog with a teal harness. If there is something more precious, I certainly don't have any idea what it would be. :))) Z
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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LOL! So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog', Z -- and, yeah, I had fun with it! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward out there and take care! ;) Yvette
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People don't smile at my stuff anymore. I'm still smiling though 😊. Z