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Oh, The Shame of It All

What to do with an inept owner...

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Comment from Dancemom
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Very cute story written by the perspective of a hedgehog. That color blue is my favorite color too. This was very well written and the picture goes perfectly with the story. Great job!

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    LOL! So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog' for this club challenge, Heather -- was a fun one, I'll admit! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward out there (hug a hedgehog!) and take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written hundred word flash fiction about the prickly pet picture. It seems the hedgehog s quite impressed with his leash and walk proudly with its owner down the street to make the heads turn

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    LOL! So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog', Sandra -- and, was a fun one, I'll admit! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward up there and take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Joan E.
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I am glad you were inspired by the Club's prompt to create this fictional tale. I will never think about hedgehogs in the same way again! Poor, pet owner to have such a critique!! Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    LOL! So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog', Joan -- was a fun one, I'll admit! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward our there (hug a hedgehog!!) and take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from damommy
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How cute he is, even with his harness awry. He's right about it being wrong. The lead should fasten to the harness just over his shoulders. Poor little thing. What humiliation for him! 8-)

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    YESSSS!! Only a few of us so far have noticed it (I used 'sideways' in the piece, but it's really caddy-wampus, isn't it?!) ! ;) So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog', Yvonne -- was a fun one, I'll admit! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward over there and take care! ;) Yvette
reply by damommy on 11-Nov-2019
    I didn't know anyone else said caddy-wampus. Good to hear it.
Comment from country ranch writer
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People just don't get it they need to take a course in how to harness your animals and keep them comfortable I doing so . Just saying!

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    YESSSS!! So glad you noticed, C-R, and that you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog'! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward over there in the Sunshine State and take care! ;) Yvette
reply by country ranch writer on 11-Nov-2019
    Smiles
reply by country ranch writer on 11-Nov-2019
    Smiles
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the Club Challenge splendidly, Yvette. Poor little thing needs to worry less over the garb as her inherent cuteness will overcome any fashion faux pas her owner may inflict. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    LOL! So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog', Angel -- and, yeah, we had a bit of fun commiserating together - lol! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward out there and take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Ms. Snyder
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I swear Yvette, I heard the NYC accent come through and the little light in the loafers accent as you wrote this Diddy, MRW and CQ. It seemed he had a bit of a lisp too! Lol YOU crack me up!!! It was exactly what I needed after reading some heavy Veterans Day stuff. BTW, Happy Veterans Day! I hope you still get that day off from school!! Enjoy your day beautiful teacher!!!! Hugs and Cheers, Fonda

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    LOL! So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog', Lady F -- and, yeah, he really was a lotta fun to write! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward up there and Happy Veterans' Day to you, too, my lady! ;) Take care over there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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The picture got my full attention as I used to have two as companions and I truly love the story line to go with it. Very well done and no glitches to note.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog', Barb -- and, yeah, I had fun with it! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward up there and take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from juliaSjames
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Nothing like starting the day with a chuckle. I love this post from the POV of the fashionista porcupine. Poking gentle fun at our fashion conscious personae. Well written, Yvette.

Blessings Julia

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    LOL! So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog', Julia -- shhhhh, don't tell, but I had a bit of fun with him, too! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward up there and take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-This is one of the
cutest pictures making
a splash on FS.
-I like your font color to match!
-Taking on the persona
of the hedgehog was good, too.
-His thoughts made me smile,
and I could picture you writing them:)
-Thanks for sharing this,
and bringing a smile this morning, Yvette:)

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    LOL! So glad you enjoyed my sweet little 'fashion hog', Pam -- shhhhh, don't tell, but I had a bit of fun with him, too! ;) Happy that his little 'attitude' made you smile! Be sure to pay that smile forward out there and take care! ;) Yvette
reply by Pam (respa) on 11-Nov-2019
    You are very welcome, Yvette, and I will keep the smiles coming🙂