Well turned out
Dressed so elegantly14 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 about birds, Well Turned Out, has the proper formatting and finds that although dressed to the nines, the penguins are laid back and cool.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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This 5-7-5 about birds, Well Turned Out, has the proper formatting and finds that although dressed to the nines, the penguins are laid back and cool.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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Many thanks Bill.
Comment from Louise Michelle
Haha - good play with words, Dolly. Who doesn't love a penguin, they're so cute. However, maybe they're a little over dressed for every day life. You made a good point, haha. Hugs, Lou Me Again - sorry I called you Dolly.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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Haha - good play with words, Dolly. Who doesn't love a penguin, they're so cute. However, maybe they're a little over dressed for every day life. You made a good point, haha. Hugs, Lou Me Again - sorry I called you Dolly.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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Thanks a lot Lou. love Jen
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I love poetry that examines common idioms and clichés. This is funny, with a cute art choice to combine into a great team. This would be fun to share in front of a large group as to what humor can be injected in a short form.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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I love poetry that examines common idioms and clichés. This is funny, with a cute art choice to combine into a great team. This would be fun to share in front of a large group as to what humor can be injected in a short form.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much. I am so pleased that you like it. Jen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fun write and you made me smile here and I love a bid of humour in poetry, you hit the spot with this one, a fine presentation for the contest, penguins are such cute birds, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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This is a fun write and you made me smile here and I love a bid of humour in poetry, you hit the spot with this one, a fine presentation for the contest, penguins are such cute birds, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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Thanks a lot Dolly. X
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Bye Bye Blackbird contest.
You describe the Penguins in a cute manor.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Bye Bye Blackbird contest.
You describe the Penguins in a cute manor.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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Thanks Sharon.
Comment from Debbie Pope
I am loving these bird poems. I'm glad that I didn't enter. I've picked four that I'm having trouble choosing from. Yours is one of them.
I like play on words and yours is perfection. Obviously, your last line is what I like so much. You juxtapose it with the harmless nature of the penguin. Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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I am loving these bird poems. I'm glad that I didn't enter. I've picked four that I'm having trouble choosing from. Yours is one of them.
I like play on words and yours is perfection. Obviously, your last line is what I like so much. You juxtapose it with the harmless nature of the penguin. Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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Choose me. (Joke). Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
This is such an unique poem. Love how the penguins are dressed. They definitely are a very neat dressed specie who loves to walk with their own family/families. Have you ever seen the movie, "March of the Penquins?"
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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This is such an unique poem. Love how the penguins are dressed. They definitely are a very neat dressed specie who loves to walk with their own family/families. Have you ever seen the movie, "March of the Penquins?"
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much. I haven't seen the movie.
Comment from Alex Rosel
LOL! Penguins dressed to kill. I've never thought of it like that before, so I applaud your humor {thumbs up}.
Good luck with this in the voting booth.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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LOL! Penguins dressed to kill. I've never thought of it like that before, so I applaud your humor {thumbs up}.
Good luck with this in the voting booth.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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Many thanks Alex. So glad you liked it.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Dressed to kill, cute little penguins they couldn't miss this bird show. Harmless and beautiful - thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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Dressed to kill, cute little penguins they couldn't miss this bird show. Harmless and beautiful - thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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Many thanks.
Comment from Ogden
That's a riot, and sure to be a contender!
Terrific illustration, too. Penguins always look funny in movies, pictures, and especially in person (in penguin?). Good luck in the contest!
Don
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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That's a riot, and sure to be a contender!
Terrific illustration, too. Penguins always look funny in movies, pictures, and especially in person (in penguin?). Good luck in the contest!
Don
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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Thhanks Don
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You're very welcome. Here's hoping 'Well Turned Out' turns out well.
Don
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Ha ha. Thanks Don.
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Don't mention it. (Or don't tell them I said it.)
Don
