Comment from Ogden

Excellent

That's funny, with a terrific illustration!
I didn't know geese were so sneaky, but I'm glad you warned me. I won't trust them any more.
Good luck in the competition!
Don

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019

Thank you Don for reviewing and the good luck wishes. I really appreciate your kind words. My children were 7 and 10 when this happened lol.

reply by Ogden on 10-Nov-2019

You're very welcome.
:)
Don

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and
presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-Effective imagery and
use of one continuous thought.
-The alliteration adds to
your description of their
behavior in stealing fries!
-A good poem, but using
"The" in line one gives
you 6 syllables. It would
read fine without it.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019

Thank you Pam for reviewing and your kind words and good luck wishes, I will check that out shortly.

reply by Pam (respa) on 11-Nov-2019

You are welcome.

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

very cute!!
very creative and talented and a well penned poem
the words ran smoothly and a nice complimentary photo to go with it
well done
i hope for the best in the contest
donette1914 11/10/2019

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019

Thank you so much for reviewing and your kind comments.

Comment from Apriori

Excellent

Nice job with this form. I like how you move from a description of the bird to a surprise French fry. I associate geese of all kinds with petulant -- the fry detail worked well with my prejudice.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019

Thank you so much for reviewing and your kind words.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Bye Bye Blackbird contest.
You describe the Canadian Goose very well.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019

Thank you so much Sharon for reviewing and your kind comments.

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

we have so many Canadian geese that fly by before they go to warmer climates/weather. They sit by the lake in hundreds sometimes; some like them, some don't, as they leave lots droppings (poo) all over. They remind me of a seagull because they love French fries, too.

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 Comment Written 10-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019

Thank you so much Rosemary for reviewing and your kind comments. Yuk the droppings are really all over lol.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

And they will certainly fight to keep it once acquired! ;) LOL! :) :) Thank you for sharing that smile and best of luck to you at the polls this evening! ;)

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 Comment Written 10-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019

Thank you so much Yvette for reviewing and your kind comments. They most certainly do fight over it, even more so than seagulls.