Body beautiful
Can't find a soul mate, wonder why?8 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This naani, Body Beautiful, uses twenty-two syllables and notes that the physique can be unique, but if the ten's a turd then leave with the nerd.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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This naani, Body Beautiful, uses twenty-two syllables and notes that the physique can be unique, but if the ten's a turd then leave with the nerd.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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Ha ha. Thanks Bill.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is an interesting entry for the Naani Poem contest.
Sounds like you've not had a lot of luck with handsome men.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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I think this is an interesting entry for the Naani Poem contest.
Sounds like you've not had a lot of luck with handsome men.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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Thanks Sharon
Comment from shaffer40
What a hilarious poem. Conjured up images of six-pack-adorned men strutting around the gym, devoid of meaningful thoughts. I know they're not all that shallow, but enough are to warrant your amusing presentation.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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What a hilarious poem. Conjured up images of six-pack-adorned men strutting around the gym, devoid of meaningful thoughts. I know they're not all that shallow, but enough are to warrant your amusing presentation.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much. Glad you liked it.
Comment from Susan X Smith
Ha, ha, ha. That was also my problem in my younger years. I love the witty message, and your style fits the contest requirements. The picture is a great addition.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Ha, ha, ha. That was also my problem in my younger years. I love the witty message, and your style fits the contest requirements. The picture is a great addition.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Many thanks Susan
Comment from moonsunrise
Your poem speaks volumes about the vanity that some men place first and foremost in their life and dating relationships. It's actually sad. I believe the intrinsic value that a person possesses (ethics, caring, sensitivity, etc.) to be much more attractive and appealing to the onlooker.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Your poem speaks volumes about the vanity that some men place first and foremost in their life and dating relationships. It's actually sad. I believe the intrinsic value that a person possesses (ethics, caring, sensitivity, etc.) to be much more attractive and appealing to the onlooker.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Many thanks
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Your welcome.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Yeah, that is the case sometimes.... but then i'm quite sure they have the same opinion of the well-built good-looking women! ;) Thanx for sharing and good luck! ;)
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Yeah, that is the case sometimes.... but then i'm quite sure they have the same opinion of the well-built good-looking women! ;) Thanx for sharing and good luck! ;)
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Thanks Yvette
Comment from RodG
I love the pairing of your photo with your poem. And I certainly understand why you might be attracted physically to this male, and also why--in the long run--you'd be turned off. He's the epitome of narcissism. Rod
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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I love the pairing of your photo with your poem. And I certainly understand why you might be attracted physically to this male, and also why--in the long run--you'd be turned off. He's the epitome of narcissism. Rod
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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You are right on both counts Rod. Thanks a lot for the review.
Comment from Alex Rosel
Ha, ha! I'm sure many will be able to relate to this. As always, it's your choice: learn from experience, or continue repeating the same mistake...
Here's wishing you the best when the voting booth opens {smiles}.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Ha, ha! I'm sure many will be able to relate to this. As always, it's your choice: learn from experience, or continue repeating the same mistake...
Here's wishing you the best when the voting booth opens {smiles}.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Thanks a lot for the review. Alex. I'm glad it made you smile.
