He Was Bloody Cruel
He made a big fin about it. (50 words)22 total reviews
Comment from Rmocruz
I enjoyed the clever wordplay in this shark love analogy.
Number 42 is well written as usual, very prolific indeed.
The Author's Notes are very informative.
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I enjoyed the clever wordplay in this shark love analogy.
Number 42 is well written as usual, very prolific indeed.
The Author's Notes are very informative.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
Comment from Gail Denham
Very cute - you did this one well - yes, his bite could do you in - no hickeys from this one I think. Good image you chose also. Make me wonder why you'd snare this one. scary
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Very cute - you did this one well - yes, his bite could do you in - no hickeys from this one I think. Good image you chose also. Make me wonder why you'd snare this one. scary
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hah, Lisa!
Some of these "new boyfriends" of yours are a "bite" for sore eyes!
Your offerings are witty and surely make me smile!
Kids would so love these. If I were still teaching, I would love to pose this type of writing in a creative writing class! So clever and fun!
Thank you!
diane
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Hah, Lisa!
Some of these "new boyfriends" of yours are a "bite" for sore eyes!
Your offerings are witty and surely make me smile!
Kids would so love these. If I were still teaching, I would love to pose this type of writing in a creative writing class! So clever and fun!
Thank you!
diane
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This certainly smacks of biting humor end to end. Best to have rid yourself of him early before you were devoured in his ravenous passions. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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This certainly smacks of biting humor end to end. Best to have rid yourself of him early before you were devoured in his ravenous passions. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
Comment from June Sargent
Oh, this is a good one! Jaws truly...what a great line! Bloody, but it is still one of my favorite movies. Thanks for this fun piece. It had a bite to it!
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Oh, this is a good one! Jaws truly...what a great line! Bloody, but it is still one of my favorite movies. Thanks for this fun piece. It had a bite to it!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
Comment from Sugarray77
A fantastic choice of photo to accompany this dangerous boyfriend. I think this dude might be the most dangerous yet, and I certainly understand the need for sending him out to sea as quickly as possible. Haha. Great job, again.
Melissa
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A fantastic choice of photo to accompany this dangerous boyfriend. I think this dude might be the most dangerous yet, and I certainly understand the need for sending him out to sea as quickly as possible. Haha. Great job, again.
Melissa
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this is brilliant Lisa and I just loved the 'sharkastic' reference! A very clever write and you are better off without this guy, his sharp wit is no match for a peaceful life! Much enjoyed Lisa, love Dolly x
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Ha ha ha, this is brilliant Lisa and I just loved the 'sharkastic' reference! A very clever write and you are better off without this guy, his sharp wit is no match for a peaceful life! Much enjoyed Lisa, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
Comment from Alex Rosel
"I chews you. Jaws truly." -- Ha, ha.
I've heard these "Great White" boys are not all that. They tend to pull your leg. You're better off without him; there's plenty other fish in the sea {winks}.
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"I chews you. Jaws truly." -- Ha, ha.
I've heard these "Great White" boys are not all that. They tend to pull your leg. You're better off without him; there's plenty other fish in the sea {winks}.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Oh, he's definitely one to stay away from. Good thing you left when you did, because he looks really hungry to me. Did you ogle your body? Probably deciding which cut to try first. This continues to be a lot of fun. :)
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Oh, he's definitely one to stay away from. Good thing you left when you did, because he looks really hungry to me. Did you ogle your body? Probably deciding which cut to try first. This continues to be a lot of fun. :)
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
Comment from Gypsymooncat
Haha, I chews you... Jaws truly...sharkastic...lol! It appears you had some teething problems with this one! Another entertaining write in this series, tho I know I've missed a few. Thanks for the smile!
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Haha, I chews you... Jaws truly...sharkastic...lol! It appears you had some teething problems with this one! Another entertaining write in this series, tho I know I've missed a few. Thanks for the smile!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
