From Boys to Men
Remember the Fallen WW113 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a wonderful tribute to the Aussie boys who gave much and gave all in that first war to end all wars... Thanx for sharing ... and may we never forget! ;)
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Such a wonderful tribute to the Aussie boys who gave much and gave all in that first war to end all wars... Thanx for sharing ... and may we never forget! ;)
Comment Written 13-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Thank you for reading and yes, Lest we Forget.
Comment from J.T. Blossom
As Antoine de Saint-Exupery so eloquently expressed in "Wind, Sand, and Stars," war is a pathway toward finding meaning in life and it does turn children into men. He goes on to point out, however, that war also results too often in suffering and death. May we find other reasons to ride horses (and airplanes) and grow our adults more sensibly. My first novel, "Horse Boys," explores similar evocative yet compromising experiences. (J.T. Blossom)
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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As Antoine de Saint-Exupery so eloquently expressed in "Wind, Sand, and Stars," war is a pathway toward finding meaning in life and it does turn children into men. He goes on to point out, however, that war also results too often in suffering and death. May we find other reasons to ride horses (and airplanes) and grow our adults more sensibly. My first novel, "Horse Boys," explores similar evocative yet compromising experiences. (J.T. Blossom)
Comment Written 13-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Hello new friend, Thanks so much for reviewing, I appreciate your comments seeing you are a published author. Kind regards, Kay.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely tribute poem for Remembrance Day Aussie, remembering the Battle of Beersheba. From boys to war weary men, so many. Nicely told,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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This is a lovely tribute poem for Remembrance Day Aussie, remembering the Battle of Beersheba. From boys to war weary men, so many. Nicely told,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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Hi Valda, So much loss, for what? Bum-fluff soldiers are those that haven't yet shaved. It was said, "the war to end all wars," how wrong they were. Love, K.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Kace. I'm happy to read this well written poem of yours which honors the veterans of your country. These old photos are wonderful to bring us back to the time period. Well described and rhymed, especially liking this stanza (it's good to read about these animals):
"Muffled hooves on burning sand
Bum-fluff soldiers gave their all
Walers carried the merry band
Into war they rode, some to fall"
Marilyn
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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Hi Kace. I'm happy to read this well written poem of yours which honors the veterans of your country. These old photos are wonderful to bring us back to the time period. Well described and rhymed, especially liking this stanza (it's good to read about these animals):
"Muffled hooves on burning sand
Bum-fluff soldiers gave their all
Walers carried the merry band
Into war they rode, some to fall"
Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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Hi marilyn, Thanks so much for reading. Glad you enjoyed. In my notes, I forgot to mention. Bum fluff soldiers are those who haven't yet shaved because of youth. Love, Kace XX
Comment from l.raven
Hi Kace, oh how I hate any war my wonderful sweet friend...
when you think of all the men and women that have died in all the wars we have had...and their brave animals that have died as well...yes we should remember all the hero
s of all time...I love your poem sweetie Pie...and a picture to remember...very well written you...love much...Linda xxoo
I am in Florida now...spent my first week at my daughters...and am now at my brothers by my mom...
I'll email you...love xxoo
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Hi Kace, oh how I hate any war my wonderful sweet friend...
when you think of all the men and women that have died in all the wars we have had...and their brave animals that have died as well...yes we should remember all the hero
s of all time...I love your poem sweetie Pie...and a picture to remember...very well written you...love much...Linda xxoo
I am in Florida now...spent my first week at my daughters...and am now at my brothers by my mom...
I'll email you...love xxoo
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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You butterfly you! Where do I send your Christmas card? Thanks for reading my dear friend, today we stop to remember them, everyone stops at eleven am. Take care buddy XXK.
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your so welcome you...that is so wonderful everyone stops to remember those fallen men and women...you take care as well...much love to you...xxoo love
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is a well thought out tribute to all the brave fighting men of the free world as they hold the fort
from the aggression of those who would make slaves of us all. Love the picture. Good job, Dear. Nancy
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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This is a well thought out tribute to all the brave fighting men of the free world as they hold the fort
from the aggression of those who would make slaves of us all. Love the picture. Good job, Dear. Nancy
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Hi Nancy, Long time no hear? Thanks so much for reading and I agree with your sentiments. Blessings, K.
Comment from aryr
What a great tribute to those who fought and continue to fight for their countries. It was a great poem that spoke of the challenges for the war and of any war. A salute to the boys who became men.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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What a great tribute to those who fought and continue to fight for their countries. It was a great poem that spoke of the challenges for the war and of any war. A salute to the boys who became men.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Hello my friend, Those were the days when boys had to grow up quickly. They were enticed to sign up; with a new uniform and four bob a week (four shillings) the thought they were kings. Bless you, love K.
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You are so welcome Kace, Kings that sometimes didn't make it home.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a beautifully penned tribute to those who serve now and for those who have served or have fallen in the past. It is well penned and quite a compelling reading adventure. You can always be counted on to take a unique approach that will teach us all something new. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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This is a beautifully penned tribute to those who serve now and for those who have served or have fallen in the past. It is well penned and quite a compelling reading adventure. You can always be counted on to take a unique approach that will teach us all something new. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Hi elaine (hope that's you) yes, boys grew up quickly in those days. The Australian Light Horse Brigade became a legend. Fearless kids that could ride like the wind. When war ended, they were told to shoot the horses (quarantine wouldn't take them back. Most men just let them go, hoping they would find food and a home. Blessings, K.
Comment from brenda bickers
Hi Aussie,
this is a well crafted poem and tells the story of 'The battle of Beersheba'
Perfectly. There is a lot of history in this poem, much of which I knew nothing about. You have certainly taught me something new today.
Your Title of this poem reflects on how so many young boys became men that day.
Thank you for sharing.
Brenda.x
P.S I do hope you are keeping safe at the moment with all the bush fires taking place. x
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Hi Aussie,
this is a well crafted poem and tells the story of 'The battle of Beersheba'
Perfectly. There is a lot of history in this poem, much of which I knew nothing about. You have certainly taught me something new today.
Your Title of this poem reflects on how so many young boys became men that day.
Thank you for sharing.
Brenda.x
P.S I do hope you are keeping safe at the moment with all the bush fires taking place. x
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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G'day Brenda, I'm not in the line of the fires. Never seen a holocaust like this one; fifty fires out of control. Forty thousand horses (Walers) went to war, one came home. Men were told to shoot them, most just let them go. Dreadful business. The quarantine in Oz refused to take them back. Have a good day my friend. Love, K.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Kace, you tell a good story about WW1. I like the term 'from boys to men' - so true - literally overnight these boys grew up when they faced the stark reality. They thought it was going to be a jolly romp. You have written your story in such a lively, vibrant manner - very descriptive work.
'Posters telling farm boys to join up' - sad that they thought it would be great for pals to go off together and it would all be over by Christmas.
Interesting author notes - Lest we forget!. Great poem. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Hi Kace, you tell a good story about WW1. I like the term 'from boys to men' - so true - literally overnight these boys grew up when they faced the stark reality. They thought it was going to be a jolly romp. You have written your story in such a lively, vibrant manner - very descriptive work.
'Posters telling farm boys to join up' - sad that they thought it would be great for pals to go off together and it would all be over by Christmas.
Interesting author notes - Lest we forget!. Great poem. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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G'day Dorothy, Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed. Yes, they thought it would be a fun romp. Best horsemen in the World. Forty thousand horses left, one came home. Brits told them to shoot them because they couldn't come back to quarantine, most let them go.
One Major General had his horse vaccinated and it came home! Blessings, my friend. Love, K.
