He's Good At Winging It
Sometimes he treated me with condor-cension. (50 words)19 total reviews
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Another thoroughly enjoyable little piece. Some great lines in this work. My favourite? It's a toss - up... carrion luggage. We're at his condor-minium
LOL
G
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Hi there,
Another thoroughly enjoyable little piece. Some great lines in this work. My favourite? It's a toss - up... carrion luggage. We're at his condor-minium
LOL
G
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
Comment from BeasPeas
LOL. You are too much! Got such a kick out of this, clever girl. Great word choices to bring us through this high-flying romance. Story and author's note are very well done. Marilyn
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LOL. You are too much! Got such a kick out of this, clever girl. Great word choices to bring us through this high-flying romance. Story and author's note are very well done. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Nov-2019
Comment from Bill Schott
He's Good at Winging It seems like it's a buz-ZARD story of romance in the Andes. You have to hope you don't get dumped from that height. Don't slam the con-door on your way out.
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He's Good at Winging It seems like it's a buz-ZARD story of romance in the Andes. You have to hope you don't get dumped from that height. Don't slam the con-door on your way out.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2019
Comment from patcelaw
Once again you have skillfully woven the story in such a way that even the condor would have been proud of your skill. May your week be lifted to new heights on wings of glory.
Patricia
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Once again you have skillfully woven the story in such a way that even the condor would have been proud of your skill. May your week be lifted to new heights on wings of glory.
Patricia
Comment Written 11-Nov-2019
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Lisa may. Condors cannot be trusted. They spend their time in very questionable places frequently. You would never want to go to dinner with one of them. They spend a lot of time "on the road." Robert
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Hello Lisa may. Condors cannot be trusted. They spend their time in very questionable places frequently. You would never want to go to dinner with one of them. They spend a lot of time "on the road." Robert
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
Comment from poetwatch
A bird that wings it and brings to life, with a feathered pen, is a giant of a bird I give my feathers of a hat to, LisaMay. :) I like this one keep it up. :)
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A bird that wings it and brings to life, with a feathered pen, is a giant of a bird I give my feathers of a hat to, LisaMay. :) I like this one keep it up. :)
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Okay, so this one was loaded with that word-play that you've become quite good at throughout all of these! :) Even makes the reader smile over a vulture... good job! ;) lOL! Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
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Okay, so this one was loaded with that word-play that you've become quite good at throughout all of these! :) Even makes the reader smile over a vulture... good job! ;) lOL! Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written piece of dating advice. It may seems like an adventure to fly high in the air with an expert but even the good things can become a burden when we get too much of it.
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A very well-written piece of dating advice. It may seems like an adventure to fly high in the air with an expert but even the good things can become a burden when we get too much of it.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
Comment from Aussie
You are sew right. The Andean condor is an endangered species? I liked your fun romance on the wing. Carrion luggage gave me a giggle. So many animals to write about. So many species. Have you heard about the coconut eagle? He saws up high, sighs a coconut, picks it up, flies on thermal underwear so he can drop it to burst on the ground. There is his dinner to be found!
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You are sew right. The Andean condor is an endangered species? I liked your fun romance on the wing. Carrion luggage gave me a giggle. So many animals to write about. So many species. Have you heard about the coconut eagle? He saws up high, sighs a coconut, picks it up, flies on thermal underwear so he can drop it to burst on the ground. There is his dinner to be found!
Comment Written 09-Nov-2019
Comment from juliaSjames
This is especially good, LisaMay..The ending is terrific. Six virtual stars is the best I can do today. After reading this I'm sure The Condor Passes will always be the special song for you two.
Like your author notes. I haven't seen a condor up close and personal in the wild, just gliding overhead when I visited Bolivia and Peru. But a friend told me that when she was skiing in Ecuador one swooped down to check out if she was a tasty morsel. Unnerving!
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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This is especially good, LisaMay..The ending is terrific. Six virtual stars is the best I can do today. After reading this I'm sure The Condor Passes will always be the special song for you two.
Like your author notes. I haven't seen a condor up close and personal in the wild, just gliding overhead when I visited Bolivia and Peru. But a friend told me that when she was skiing in Ecuador one swooped down to check out if she was a tasty morsel. Unnerving!
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 09-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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I like that song - quite hauntingly beautiful.
How amazing, and scary, to have a condor come by for a look.
Thanks for reviewing!
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Yeah the Andean pipes are marvelous. Hope you'll visit the Andes one day. There are great tours especially for adventurous types like you.
