night wind
A 5-7-5 horror poem4 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
It is sad but true so many graves go unattended. Once buried no one goes to take care of the grave to maintain it. It is sad as I said but true.
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It is sad but true so many graves go unattended. Once buried no one goes to take care of the grave to maintain it. It is sad as I said but true.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2019
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This definitely has several senses going on: taste (sour), sound (wind whipped/battered) , sight (graveyard, tombs, effect of wind), touch (whipped/battered). Nice 'w' alliteration with 'wind whipped.' Nice 't' alliteration with tombs and time. Super entry!
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This definitely has several senses going on: taste (sour), sound (wind whipped/battered) , sight (graveyard, tombs, effect of wind), touch (whipped/battered). Nice 'w' alliteration with 'wind whipped.' Nice 't' alliteration with tombs and time. Super entry!
Comment Written 09-Nov-2019
Comment from Apriori
You have some nice assurance going and you have crafted this to conform to the rules of the form. Best wishes for success in the contest! I'm in New Orleans where there are so many marvelous cemetaries. This poem gets me in the mood to visit
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You have some nice assurance going and you have crafted this to conform to the rules of the form. Best wishes for success in the contest! I'm in New Orleans where there are so many marvelous cemetaries. This poem gets me in the mood to visit
Comment Written 09-Nov-2019
Comment from Alex Rosel
I liked this entry. And the image you've chosen to accompany it is particularly "moody" {smiles}.
I like the concept of a "sour" wind {thumbs up}.
I wish you the best of luck when the contest is judged {smiles}.
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I liked this entry. And the image you've chosen to accompany it is particularly "moody" {smiles}.
I like the concept of a "sour" wind {thumbs up}.
I wish you the best of luck when the contest is judged {smiles}.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2019
