A Pair
Just For Fun18 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Laura. Good job with the prompt. Your play on words works well, and the picture is a good pairing. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Love, Jan
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Laura. Good job with the prompt. Your play on words works well, and the picture is a good pairing. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Love, Jan
Comment Written 30-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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Thanks very much Jan.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Laura, this is very clever - in eight syllables you have written a good message. One little typo - in line one - 'one t(w)o - add the w. I can never think what to write in these short pieces. Well done - warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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Hello Laura, this is very clever - in eight syllables you have written a good message. One little typo - in line one - 'one t(w)o - add the w. I can never think what to write in these short pieces. Well done - warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 29-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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Thanks Dorothy, I appreciate your thoughtful review. It's not a typo, I was making a joke about all the 2's in the English language, to, too, two etc. Very confusing for people learning English as adults, so my conversational English student have told me. lol
Comment from Therese Caron
Interesting use of the three versions of to, too, and two. The picture is perfect for this poem. It took me awhile to figure it out! Great idea and great writing.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Interesting use of the three versions of to, too, and two. The picture is perfect for this poem. It took me awhile to figure it out! Great idea and great writing.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Thanks, Therese, I appreciate your thoughtful review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-4-2 poem about the different two's with different meanings to confuse the writer sometimes so much that it gets too much for them to handle .
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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A very well-written 2-4-2 poem about the different two's with different meanings to confuse the writer sometimes so much that it gets too much for them to handle .
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your review and thoughtful comments.
Comment from Cybertron1986
The "too's," "to,"and "twos," threw me for a loop :)
I'll be honest. I read this over and over to grasp the entirety of this piece, and when I got it I had a pleasant chuckle. Thank you for sharing this. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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The "too's," "to,"and "twos," threw me for a loop :)
I'll be honest. I read this over and over to grasp the entirety of this piece, and when I got it I had a pleasant chuckle. Thank you for sharing this. Nicely done.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Thanks for your review glad you liked it.
Comment from Barbaraj1
A clever poem for the 2-4-2 poem. The word two can also be to and too.
No wonder it's so hard to learn the English language. It was fun to read.
I hope you did well in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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A clever poem for the 2-4-2 poem. The word two can also be to and too.
No wonder it's so hard to learn the English language. It was fun to read.
I hope you did well in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Thanks so much, the contest is not done well still hoping. The English language is so difficult I feel for people learning as adults.
Comment from Cindy Warren
Yeah, this one was fun. I'm one of those weird ladies that doesn't have a hundred shoes, but they do tend to take up space by the door. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Yeah, this one was fun. I'm one of those weird ladies that doesn't have a hundred shoes, but they do tend to take up space by the door. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Thanks Cindy, I appreciate your feedback.
Comment from Raul1
Those are raggedy shoes you have in this picture. The picture fits perfectly with the poem and it makes sense. No grammatical errors. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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Those are raggedy shoes you have in this picture. The picture fits perfectly with the poem and it makes sense. No grammatical errors. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
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I appreciate your thoughtful feedback.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Alchera
A simple provocative great little thought just to fill in the given contest entry 2-4-2 Poetry. The format corrisponds exactly to the poetical theme required but who would ever imagine that it could also consist of a numerical solution? Great job. Chapeau! May your day be brighter than ever!
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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A simple provocative great little thought just to fill in the given contest entry 2-4-2 Poetry. The format corrisponds exactly to the poetical theme required but who would ever imagine that it could also consist of a numerical solution? Great job. Chapeau! May your day be brighter than ever!
Comment Written 19-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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Thank you
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You are welcomed! Blessings
Comment from lyenochka
I see you had fun with homonyms as there are three "two"-sounding words. I like the march-like rhythm which goes well with the picture of the pair (two) of shoes!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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I see you had fun with homonyms as there are three "two"-sounding words. I like the march-like rhythm which goes well with the picture of the pair (two) of shoes!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Thank you I appreciate your reviewing my poem and the stars.
