Horror Hot Dog (in 13 words)
It'll go nicely with the brain smoothie.20 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
Ewwww, you have me imagining blood and gore... haha, all over a simple hotdog with ketchup. I chuckled at this instead of gasped with horror. Very well done, Lisa. Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
  |
Ewwww, you have me imagining blood and gore... haha, all over a simple hotdog with ketchup. I chuckled at this instead of gasped with horror. Very well done, Lisa. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
-
Perhaps you might have gasped if it were a severed penis?
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written thirteen word horror poem about the juicy hotdog with a concealed horrific discovery after the first bite to find a bloody finger underneath the sausage.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
|
A very well-written thirteen word horror poem about the juicy hotdog with a concealed horrific discovery after the first bite to find a bloody finger underneath the sausage.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
-
Thanks for your review.
Comment from JudyE
This is a very effective use of your thirteen words and certainly conveys a certain amount of horror. I'm glad we're not having hot dogs tonight. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
|
This is a very effective use of your thirteen words and certainly conveys a certain amount of horror. I'm glad we're not having hot dogs tonight. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
-
It is rather off-putting.... it could be worse; it could be a severed penis!
-
I don't think I'll comment on that! lol
Comment from Alex Rosel
Ha, ha! I do like this {smiles}. Although I'm not sure how suited it is for the contest as it made he laugh rather than terrify me. Perhaps the image you've chosen doesn't help as it's clearly a genuine hot dog and not a severed finger. Just a thought...
Have a great weekend,
Alex.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
 |
Ha, ha! I do like this {smiles}. Although I'm not sure how suited it is for the contest as it made he laugh rather than terrify me. Perhaps the image you've chosen doesn't help as it's clearly a genuine hot dog and not a severed finger. Just a thought...
Have a great weekend,
Alex.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
-
Maybe it would be more horrific if it were a severed penis?
Even more of a problem to get a photo.
Thanks for the super rating.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness Lisa! This is a horror write! A blood finger instead of a sausage in a hot dog! Yuk! Glad I never eat them! You have put me off my breakfast, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
|
Oh my goodness Lisa! This is a horror write! A blood finger instead of a sausage in a hot dog! Yuk! Glad I never eat them! You have put me off my breakfast, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
-
Sorry! I hope you recover your appetite.
Thanks for your review.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Ewwwwwwwwwwww!! You might not be far from the truth about the hotdog!! LOL And a brain freeze, what flavor??
Good luck with the contest!!! They've recalled like millions of pounds of chicken this week. There might be metal in it. Two weeks ago they closed all the Taco Bells because they thought there might be shards of metal in it. I think it's time to be Vegan!
Patty
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
|
Ewwwwwwwwwwww!! You might not be far from the truth about the hotdog!! LOL And a brain freeze, what flavor??
Good luck with the contest!!! They've recalled like millions of pounds of chicken this week. There might be metal in it. Two weeks ago they closed all the Taco Bells because they thought there might be shards of metal in it. I think it's time to be Vegan!
Patty
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
-
That sounds like a major problem - don't like the thought of eating iron filings.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Ewwwww. Now I can't even think of Vienna sausages either. This is a great horror entry. And end rhymes with two-syllable words concealed, revealed, congealed, too!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
|
Ewwwww. Now I can't even think of Vienna sausages either. This is a great horror entry. And end rhymes with two-syllable words concealed, revealed, congealed, too!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
-
Sorry to put you off your food! Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from LyndaS
...go nicely with a brain smoothie... LMAO!! This is a nifty entry into this contest. You did a lot in 13 words. Grossed me out, actually. And you even have ending rhymes. Very clever, Sister O' Mine!! I think this will do well with that mysterious committee. Well done!! Lynda
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
|
...go nicely with a brain smoothie... LMAO!! This is a nifty entry into this contest. You did a lot in 13 words. Grossed me out, actually. And you even have ending rhymes. Very clever, Sister O' Mine!! I think this will do well with that mysterious committee. Well done!! Lynda
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
-
I was going to make it a severed penis but thought that would be too much of a mouthful!
-
LFMAO!!!!!!
-
I have been criticised for my hot dog looking normal - no one was willing to donate either a finger or a penis for a photo. Men can be so selfish.
-
Dumb ass. Women have the dick pics. Need one?
-
Are you a collector? I don't have any.
-
Google it. Great resource for beginners.
Comment from lyenochka
Okay, that's pretty horrible - not sure if it's really "horror" but can't take that either. It makes me remember all those urban legends about fast food "horror!"
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
|
Okay, that's pretty horrible - not sure if it's really "horror" but can't take that either. It makes me remember all those urban legends about fast food "horror!"
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
-
I don't trust fast food. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Oh yuck! I'd freak right out if I bit into a hotdog and it turned out to be a severed finger! That's some gory stuff for sure!
Pretty creative offering!! xoxo
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
|
Oh yuck! I'd freak right out if I bit into a hotdog and it turned out to be a severed finger! That's some gory stuff for sure!
Pretty creative offering!! xoxo
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
-
Might be ok if there was a valuable diamond ring on it for fright compensation.
-
Yikes! I don?t know I?d make to even find such a gem! Haha!
