Horror Hot Dog (in 13 words)
It'll go nicely with the brain smoothie.20 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
I'm vegetarian now, but I have heard "horror" stories of prepared foods. You never know what the heck you are eating. Hopefully well supervised for cleanliness but it's a crap shoot. Marilyn
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I'm vegetarian now, but I have heard "horror" stories of prepared foods. You never know what the heck you are eating. Hopefully well supervised for cleanliness but it's a crap shoot. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Nov-2019
Comment from poetwatch
LisaMay it is a horror poem not a horrible poem. :) Talk about gross. You came out with a dilly. Now if after one bite you notice an eye looking at you... well would be something to see. :) Good work woman.
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LisaMay it is a horror poem not a horrible poem. :) Talk about gross. You came out with a dilly. Now if after one bite you notice an eye looking at you... well would be something to see. :) Good work woman.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Gross, but well done, LisaMay. Good job with the contest prompt, the picture, the formatting of your words, and the message--as I said gross--but in keeping with the theme. Best wishes. Respectfully with Love, Jan
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Gross, but well done, LisaMay. Good job with the contest prompt, the picture, the formatting of your words, and the message--as I said gross--but in keeping with the theme. Best wishes. Respectfully with Love, Jan
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Eeeeeeewww! Please tell me you got this 'idea' from some 'similar' news story or something.... cuz that's just...well, yuck! :( Best of luck to you in the contest, L-M!! ;) Yvette
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Eeeeeeewww! Please tell me you got this 'idea' from some 'similar' news story or something.... cuz that's just...well, yuck! :( Best of luck to you in the contest, L-M!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
Comment from Bill Schott
This thirteen-word poem, Horror Hot Dog, uses the correct number of words and finds that hot dog fingers are sometimes confused with hot dogs -- and fingers.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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This thirteen-word poem, Horror Hot Dog, uses the correct number of words and finds that hot dog fingers are sometimes confused with hot dogs -- and fingers.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You certainly have used all thirteen of your words effectively to meet the requirements of the prompt. The poem is indeed horrifying, describing a scene straight out of a horror movie.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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You certainly have used all thirteen of your words effectively to meet the requirements of the prompt. The poem is indeed horrifying, describing a scene straight out of a horror movie.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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Put you off hot dogs I guess!
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Oh, no, I'll go right on eating hotdogs! :-)
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Just spit out those stray fingers!
Comment from Gail Denham
Ugh and double ugh - I may not be able to eat the Costco cheap hot dog any more. I'll be thinking of severed fingers. Was that a contest - I guess it wa s- good entry.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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Ugh and double ugh - I may not be able to eat the Costco cheap hot dog any more. I'll be thinking of severed fingers. Was that a contest - I guess it wa s- good entry.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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Hot dogs are probably bad for you anyway, so I have saved you from an unhealthy diet.
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possibly true. One of our sons went on a field trip to a hot dog factory - I think he avoids hot dogs to this day.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Oh my goodness, Lisa!
Well, there goes my lunch choice today! I may never eat another hot dog...ever!
Well-played! Just the right amount of gore...with a touch of ketchup!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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Oh my goodness, Lisa!
Well, there goes my lunch choice today! I may never eat another hot dog...ever!
Well-played! Just the right amount of gore...with a touch of ketchup!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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If you ketchup with friends for lunch, I guess hot dogs won't be what you order.
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Oh, Lisa!
You are a hoot!
Take Care!
diane
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a technically sound 13 Word Poem on a horrific discovery. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a technically sound 13 Word Poem on a horrific discovery. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from RodG
This is the kind of horror story that used to happen in the 20s here in Chicago when Capone waged war against other gangsters. This was a "message" sent as a warning. Good rhyme choices. Rod
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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This is the kind of horror story that used to happen in the 20s here in Chicago when Capone waged war against other gangsters. This was a "message" sent as a warning. Good rhyme choices. Rod
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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Gangsters fingers, and ears and toes too I guess... concrete boots.... Capone and his lot were ruthless.
Thanks for reviewing.
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My pleasure.
