The Reunion
Bittersweet6 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This really beautiful, passionate, romantic, saturated with intense feelings and emotions. You're colorful and descriptive wording set the stage and paint a picture for the readers to visualize. I really enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
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This really beautiful, passionate, romantic, saturated with intense feelings and emotions. You're colorful and descriptive wording set the stage and paint a picture for the readers to visualize. I really enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Thank you such a nice review. :)
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Is there a reason why they have to wait 15 years between meetings? But that sense of recognition, of awareness, of opportunities missed and unexpressed longings. Beautifully expressed.
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Is there a reason why they have to wait 15 years between meetings? But that sense of recognition, of awareness, of opportunities missed and unexpressed longings. Beautifully expressed.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. It's much appreciated.
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you're welcome
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Love story, fifteen years ago gone, memory knocks, wish to meet for reunion, touch and share again at the same special meeting place; well said, well done.
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Love story, fifteen years ago gone, memory knocks, wish to meet for reunion, touch and share again at the same special meeting place; well said, well done.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from juliaSjames
You wrote such an excellent poem that I was startled to see you were following a prompt to incorporate key words.
The romance of the story you recounted, the smooth meter and elegant rhyme - all contribute to a most enjoyable write.
Best of luck in the contest, mystery poet.
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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You wrote such an excellent poem that I was startled to see you were following a prompt to incorporate key words.
The romance of the story you recounted, the smooth meter and elegant rhyme - all contribute to a most enjoyable write.
Best of luck in the contest, mystery poet.
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review. :)
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is melancholy and nostalgic and seems to store a memory of a love long-lost. It looks like it fits the writing prompt very well. I like the line: let's seize the day and dance. Nice 'd' alliteration there. Not sure what to improve on.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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This is melancholy and nostalgic and seems to store a memory of a love long-lost. It looks like it fits the writing prompt very well. I like the line: let's seize the day and dance. Nice 'd' alliteration there. Not sure what to improve on.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much.:)
Comment from lauralumummu
This is so bittersweet, you are right. Well written and you use are the words in an interesting well thought out way. All the best in the contest, Laura
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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This is so bittersweet, you are right. Well written and you use are the words in an interesting well thought out way. All the best in the contest, Laura
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for this great review. :)
