Belonging
An Acrostic Poem31 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Acrostic Poetry contest.
Your message to people telling them to get along and have every one belong is well done.
Good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the Acrostic Poetry contest.
Your message to people telling them to get along and have every one belong is well done.
Good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 09-Nov-2019
Comment from zanya
Yes indeed - if only we all could actually get along think what a different world it would be !! well portrayed here in this Acrostic with candour and honesty
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Yes indeed - if only we all could actually get along think what a different world it would be !! well portrayed here in this Acrostic with candour and honesty
Comment Written 09-Nov-2019
Comment from sunnilicious
I like the irony of your artwork choice to the poem. Sports is a great way to fit in and get along with others. And the Olympics is a world event. Well thought out poem. Nicely written. Good wisdom with visual imagery. Excellent work :)
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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I like the irony of your artwork choice to the poem. Sports is a great way to fit in and get along with others. And the Olympics is a world event. Well thought out poem. Nicely written. Good wisdom with visual imagery. Excellent work :)
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much, I was unsure about the picture, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Raul1
This is an interesting take on a dream. I like this poem. Very good work! I think that this poem has a chance of winning the contest! Good luck in the contest!
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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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This is an interesting take on a dream. I like this poem. Very good work! I think that this poem has a chance of winning the contest! Good luck in the contest!
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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Thank you Friend, glad you enjoyed this one, I'll have to work a bit harder to gain that fifth star, much appreciated****kahpot
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You're welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, kahpot, with your contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. Your words flow smoothly with a super message. Everyone wants to belong and there is no reason (t least legal reason) why we can't accept one for who s/he is. Your presentation is great--the color scheme, the picture choice, the formatting of lines, and the message. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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You did a great job, kahpot, with your contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. Your words flow smoothly with a super message. Everyone wants to belong and there is no reason (t least legal reason) why we can't accept one for who s/he is. Your presentation is great--the color scheme, the picture choice, the formatting of lines, and the message. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much for these great and inspirational comments and review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine acrostic with a unified essence, and everyone has a write to live in this world without being threatened, live and let live, I'm loving the sentiments here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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A fine acrostic with a unified essence, and everyone has a write to live in this world without being threatened, live and let live, I'm loving the sentiments here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Hitcher
If being happy, loved and content are what all seek then yes I would say we do ... Alas there are too many who want more, more wealth, more power, more say.
I liked your use of the Olympic rings to bring everyone together. A nice use of the acrostic form. Good luck!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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If being happy, loved and content are what all seek then yes I would say we do ... Alas there are too many who want more, more wealth, more power, more say.
I liked your use of the Olympic rings to bring everyone together. A nice use of the acrostic form. Good luck!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your excellent comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Kahpot. Nice job on the acrostic poem. The message is strong because in this life we should all be equal. It is man that sets up the tribes and changes the rules. I like your message. Good luck in the contest. Robert
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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Hello Kahpot. Nice job on the acrostic poem. The message is strong because in this life we should all be equal. It is man that sets up the tribes and changes the rules. I like your message. Good luck in the contest. Robert
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
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You're welcome
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You're welcome
Comment from Neonewman
This, my friend, is an excellent entry for this Acrostic poetry contest. Smooth, precise crafting for sure. I enjoyed the message or desire to belong, as most of us can relate.
God bless
Steve
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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This, my friend, is an excellent entry for this Acrostic poetry contest. Smooth, precise crafting for sure. I enjoyed the message or desire to belong, as most of us can relate.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your excellent review and comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
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Always a pleasure.
Comment from Gail Denham
You bring up good points in our poem for sure. And to accept and love all people is what Jesus taught. We may not like the deeds of some people - we will be offended - but we love the individual.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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You bring up good points in our poem for sure. And to accept and love all people is what Jesus taught. We may not like the deeds of some people - we will be offended - but we love the individual.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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Thank you for this excellent review, very much appreciated****kahpot
