Belonging
An Acrostic Poem31 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written acrostic poem about having respect and understanding for other cultures both ways and there will be less conflict between different kinds of people.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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A very well-written acrostic poem about having respect and understanding for other cultures both ways and there will be less conflict between different kinds of people.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful review, and yes hopefully much less conflict, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork
and presentation, kahpot.
-You note is appreciated.
-A very well written acrostic
with effective rhyme and message.
-Your ideas flow very well, too.
-I like the line about
"creed, color, and gender"
and the image of "unknown thrones."
-Very good concluding lines, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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-Very nice artwork
and presentation, kahpot.
-You note is appreciated.
-A very well written acrostic
with effective rhyme and message.
-Your ideas flow very well, too.
-I like the line about
"creed, color, and gender"
and the image of "unknown thrones."
-Very good concluding lines, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful review, I am it flowed as that is what I was trying for, much appreciated****kahpot
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You are very welcome, and I appreciate your reply.
Comment from Flyaway1
Point well made. I like the couplet rhyming. It makes the poem flow well. The visual very in tune with the point being expressed. The last sentence answers the first sentence. His dream was answered from the moment God made him a human being.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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Point well made. I like the couplet rhyming. It makes the poem flow well. The visual very in tune with the point being expressed. The last sentence answers the first sentence. His dream was answered from the moment God made him a human being.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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Thank you for you wonderful and understanding review and comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lauralumummu
Amazing well-written acrostic poem, belonging great topic. I love the way your picture goes with the color scheme in the body of the poem. All the best in the contest, Laura.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Amazing well-written acrostic poem, belonging great topic. I love the way your picture goes with the color scheme in the body of the poem. All the best in the contest, Laura.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
what a gorgeous poem you wrote about belonging. Family is so I important in life and we need to cope with one another. If we love one another instead of hate each other, how easy life would be. Life is rather precious.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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what a gorgeous poem you wrote about belonging. Family is so I important in life and we need to cope with one another. If we love one another instead of hate each other, how easy life would be. Life is rather precious.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your great review and comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Gosh, don't you find yourself saying this more and more these days -- the rhetoric is just over-the-top sometimes! :( :( A wonderful and goal-worthy offering, sir -- love that you make a point to use the term 'deserves to be seen' -- working with teens, this is SO important to balance with challenging them.... yes! all part of the human race where thrones are not necessary (or warranted in most cases!)! :) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) :) Yvette
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Gosh, don't you find yourself saying this more and more these days -- the rhetoric is just over-the-top sometimes! :( :( A wonderful and goal-worthy offering, sir -- love that you make a point to use the term 'deserves to be seen' -- working with teens, this is SO important to balance with challenging them.... yes! all part of the human race where thrones are not necessary (or warranted in most cases!)! :) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) :) Yvette
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review and comments, I can't imagine dealing with teens all the time must be very challenging, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gloria ....
Very well done acrostic poem, kahpot. Your poem is clear, the tone is inspiring and hopeful and definitely an ideal to work toward.
Your entire presentation is cohesive and fine metre and rhyme.
Wishing you much luck with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Very well done acrostic poem, kahpot. Your poem is clear, the tone is inspiring and hopeful and definitely an ideal to work toward.
Your entire presentation is cohesive and fine metre and rhyme.
Wishing you much luck with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thank you so very much, your review and comments mean a great deal to me, and the wonderful stars, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Janetsue
This is an excellent acrostic, kahpot. You've chosen a good word to write about and you've presented a strong message in all the lines. I especially like the way you've concluded it with that important statement. :-)
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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This is an excellent acrostic, kahpot. You've chosen a good word to write about and you've presented a strong message in all the lines. I especially like the way you've concluded it with that important statement. :-)
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your excellent review and comments, I feel we all need recognition, very much appreciated****kahpot
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You're very welcome!!
Comment from lyenochka
Loved this, Kahpot. Please consider this a virtual six! Your theme of belonging resonated with me and God made us all to belong to His Family. Wonderful rhyming acrostic poem in form and in theme!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Loved this, Kahpot. Please consider this a virtual six! Your theme of belonging resonated with me and God made us all to belong to His Family. Wonderful rhyming acrostic poem in form and in theme!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful and inspiring review, yes we all must belong, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from CrystieCookie999
An acrostic with a rhyme scheme is always impressive. I surmise the last line definitely sums things up strongly. I see some 'c' alliteration in 'creed' and 'color.' I was only going to point out that 'life long' is actually a compound word, so you can take the space out so it reads: lifelong in the first line.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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An acrostic with a rhyme scheme is always impressive. I surmise the last line definitely sums things up strongly. I see some 'c' alliteration in 'creed' and 'color.' I was only going to point out that 'life long' is actually a compound word, so you can take the space out so it reads: lifelong in the first line.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much for your review and feedback, I thought that to be the case but it just didn't look right I will change, much appreciated****kahpot
