Comment from irishauthorme

Exceptional

Deep! Couldn't see where you were going for a while but then I caught up, "apes" threw me off, glad you explained that in your notes. Liked the quote from "Walt," always been interested in OOBE.
Think all of us would like top have a safe haven where we could go in times of need,
Great work, irish

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019

Thanks Irish,
I appreciate your comments annual review on this particular piece and particularly appreciate the six stars. But comes a point in my riding where I just can't seem to overcome block and I worked on this one for a little over 3 weeks which is a usual but unsatisfied with it I refuse to do too much editing as the pulling becomes a product of the moment. Again, thanks for the rating and I will send you some more details via email.

Hope to see you soon,

Brother Badger

Darren

Dewy Bewy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thank you for taking us on a trip to your "healing sphere" and the wonderful message that was shared. I wonder if everyone could invoke their own secret cove of healing?
Comments:
"while wings of apes' hum-" (apes) I don't think the apostrophe is needed.
"next thought, "Its horribly cold!" (It's) Apostrophe needed. :))
"to this helpful healings sphere" (healing) I think it's used adjectivally here not as a plural of healing.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019

thanks so much Helen, I am very thankful or you're in exhausted help with my errors. I have attitude, I made a couple more small changes. thanks again for your wonderful reviews I am very thankful and I pray that you and yours will have a blessed and safe holiday season.

Blessings,

Brother Badger

Grateful Writer

Darren

reply by lyenochka on 05-Dec-2019

You're welcome, Darren. Blessings to you this holy season!

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

You certainly take the reader through quite a range of emotions. Everything starts out so tranquil, then the fear, and back to being sedate at the end, unless you consider that unsettling feeling of arriving the day before.
Great job.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019

Dear Debi,
thanks so much for your wonderful reviews and kindness. I am very thankful to have people who look at my writing and I'm blessed I know you here in this special place. thanks for your continued support reviews any encouragement;
and it is my prayer that you and yours will have a safe, blessed and joyous holiday season.


Blessings,

Brother Badger

Darren

Comment from Rebecca Lee

Excellent

I would love some of these special powers myself, how does one acquire them? Perhaps that shall be part two of this incredible poem - I love the words you use and the way you describe things, as well as the fact that I learned a new word today...educational and inspirational!

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019

thanks for the compliment and the review I appreciate your words. It's always a pleasure meeting new people here and I look forward to collaborating more in the future. Thanks again for the great review and the woman by. Happy holidays!

Blessings,

Brother Badger

Darren

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Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

You have some good metaphors here. Also, your imagery appeals to many of the senses. This will definitely draw the reader in. This poem invites the reader in to reflect upon the peaceful stressless places their mind can take them. You are encouraging a form of meditation to constructive and willingly go somewhere else. Well written.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019

Thanks so much for your time, encouragement and continued support. you have been very faithful reviewer here and I need to catch up on some reviewing of my own. You have a knack for bringing out the best qualities as a Healer.

Blessings to you and your family, and

Happy Holidays~

Brother Badger

Darren

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