Truth and Fantasy
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "Mistaken Identity"Short stories
13 total reviews
Comment from Gail Denham
Do folks actually take their hedgehogs out for a walk with aleash? Not that the prowler was less of a problem, but she could have adopted him. She wasn't scared, only curious. Interesting reaction. cute story
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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Do folks actually take their hedgehogs out for a walk with aleash? Not that the prowler was less of a problem, but she could have adopted him. She wasn't scared, only curious. Interesting reaction. cute story
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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I didn?t think so, but there again.....Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Rmocruz
I find this short story to be pleasant and entertaining, quite suitable
for children. Your photo-art selection well complements your theme.
Best wishes in the contest with this well written contest entry.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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I find this short story to be pleasant and entertaining, quite suitable
for children. Your photo-art selection well complements your theme.
Best wishes in the contest with this well written contest entry.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your complimentary review, it was fun to write.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, these little creatures are rarely seen as they wait for us all to go to bed before scampering under the fences and enjoying our gardens, I enjoyed your quaint story here Trisha, the 'prowler' indeed, they are close to becoming extinct in Britain, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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He he he, these little creatures are rarely seen as they wait for us all to go to bed before scampering under the fences and enjoying our gardens, I enjoyed your quaint story here Trisha, the 'prowler' indeed, they are close to becoming extinct in Britain, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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It?s a shame they are becoming extinct. I presume it?s another result of man?s chemicals affecting their food chain. Thanks for your review!
Hugs Trisha
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They passed a law to say that they can be killed!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the Club Challenge splendidly as you deliver a delightfully playful piece that speaks to the artwork beautifully. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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This meets the Club Challenge splendidly as you deliver a delightfully playful piece that speaks to the artwork beautifully. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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As always, I value your reviews
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sallyo
Hear ye! Hear ye! It would be a possum where I live. This is a lovely little story that begins with the grandiose and then ends with the everyday little smile.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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Hear ye! Hear ye! It would be a possum where I live. This is a lovely little story that begins with the grandiose and then ends with the everyday little smile.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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Australia? Thanks for the complimentary review.
Hugs, Trisha
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Yep. Tasmania
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I don't know who came
up with this picture,
but it makes me smile
each time I see it.
-I enjoyed your story
about it, Trisha.
-The description and
development of details are good.
-I like the concept of the
town crier in the beginning.
-You show us what the town
is like-people feel safe and
don't have to lock their doors.
-I can see why Jenny would
laugh when she saw the prowler!
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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-I don't know who came
up with this picture,
but it makes me smile
each time I see it.
-I enjoyed your story
about it, Trisha.
-The description and
development of details are good.
-I like the concept of the
town crier in the beginning.
-You show us what the town
is like-people feel safe and
don't have to lock their doors.
-I can see why Jenny would
laugh when she saw the prowler!
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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It was given for a flash fiction challenge club idea. Thanks, Pam, it?s always good to get your reviews
Hugs, Trisha
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You are very welcome, Trisha. I enjoy your writing:)
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
That would definitely be a case of mistaken identity. Unfortunately, he's just to cute to be a prowler. Poor creature just wanted something to eat. I really like what you've done with the subject matter. I enjoyed reading this Bucketlist! Well done!
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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That would definitely be a case of mistaken identity. Unfortunately, he's just to cute to be a prowler. Poor creature just wanted something to eat. I really like what you've done with the subject matter. I enjoyed reading this Bucketlist! Well done!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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Hi Jeffrey! They are cute and make snuffling grunting noises. Thanks for your positive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written flash fiction about the little brand hedgehog that disturbs the house guest's sleep at night while searching for food to eat.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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A very well-written flash fiction about the little brand hedgehog that disturbs the house guest's sleep at night while searching for food to eat.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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They are quite noisy, snuffling, grunting little critters! Thanks fir your positive review?
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Rikki66
Best wishes in the challenge.
Rikki ***************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Best wishes in the challenge.
Rikki ***************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Rikki , to me your reviewing ?tone? seems to have changed since I posted ?What?, to a more formal one. Sorry if I?m incorrect!
Hugs, Trisha
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I try to give my best review but some times my vision cuts me short. I still adore you. :)
Rikki
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! :) ;) What a fun and even nostalgic take on this cute pic, Trisha -- leave it to you to bring us a story none of us would have even dreamed of! ;) Thank you for sharing that smile this evening! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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LOL!! :) ;) What a fun and even nostalgic take on this cute pic, Trisha -- leave it to you to bring us a story none of us would have even dreamed of! ;) Thank you for sharing that smile this evening! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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Hey, Yvette. My creativity seems to have got back to work. Fir a while there after my friend?s passing, I had no motivation to write.im glad you enjoyed the story.hugs, Trisha
