Fresh Air
Nonet Poetry Contest Entry15 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
A lovely nonet that captures the warmth and happiness that comes from memories minus the the pain. Once the guilt has been filtered out, what remains is golden.
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A lovely nonet that captures the warmth and happiness that comes from memories minus the the pain. Once the guilt has been filtered out, what remains is golden.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thank you, June. You totally get it! So pleased that you enjoyed this contest entry. Nonets are a favorite of mine. These thoughts were present recently when a friend brought up an old relationship that ended badly. I realized that the memories had no harmful substance anymore. Unexpected therapy! LOL I appreciate this. Thank you. Lynda
Comment from oliver818
I like this poem, it has a nice feel to it. It flows well and has nice imagery. I particularly enjoyed the ending. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
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I like this poem, it has a nice feel to it. It flows well and has nice imagery. I particularly enjoyed the ending. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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I appreciate you taking the time to read this, Oliver. These are lovely comments and I'm glad you liked this. Thank you so much! Lynda
Comment from Pantygynt
A neatly constructed nonet that is syllabically compliant and creates the desired inverted isosceles triangular shape without having to resort to the space bar.
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A neatly constructed nonet that is syllabically compliant and creates the desired inverted isosceles triangular shape without having to resort to the space bar.
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much! Yes, nonet construction is tricky and this took a bit of time. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this entry. Loved the comments! Thank you. Lynda
Comment from moonsunrise
I absolutely loved reading your very flowing Nonet poem entry.
The image that you selected is breathtaking.
Best of luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing!
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I absolutely loved reading your very flowing Nonet poem entry.
The image that you selected is breathtaking.
Best of luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much!! This is a lovely review. I appreciate the gracious stars and you taking the time to read this entry. I just had to use this picture as it was portraying exactly what I was feeling. Great comments. Thank you again. Lynda
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My pleasure.
Comment from dragonpoet
This shows how serene you feel after you have put a lost love or bad relationship behind you. You have hope for the future and look forward to the changes life brings you.
Good luck in the contest and keep writing
dragonpoet
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This shows how serene you feel after you have put a lost love or bad relationship behind you. You have hope for the future and look forward to the changes life brings you.
Good luck in the contest and keep writing
dragonpoet
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thank you! I so much appreciate you taking the time to read and review this entry. Glad you 'got it' and understood exactly what I wanted to say. Lovely comments! Thank you. Lynda
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You are most kindly welcome, Lynda.
Joan
