Fresh Air
Nonet Poetry Contest Entry15 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Fresh Air",
is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review, I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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"Fresh Air",
is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review, I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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What lovely comments! I very much appreciate you taking the time to read and review this contest entry. Thank you! Lynda
Lynda, my possum,
you're very welcome and certainly deserved them.
God bless and take care,
the Duchess :)))
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a beautiful, moving nonet poem, which could be taken in at least two ways--probably your intention. The speaker could be widowed, healing, and dealing well with the loss or someone moving on after a break up. Either way the speaker is in an improving frame of mind.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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This is a beautiful, moving nonet poem, which could be taken in at least two ways--probably your intention. The speaker could be widowed, healing, and dealing well with the loss or someone moving on after a break up. Either way the speaker is in an improving frame of mind.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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Great review, Janice! It was the moving on after an ugly break up that I experienced last week. Very therapeutic and extremely liberating. Of course it took me a few years to get there. lol Your comments are lovely and I appreciate them very much. Thank you! Lynda
Comment from Susan Larson
What a positive take on a relationship that wasn't meant to be. Sweeping the swirling regrets from your mind, embracing the winds of change and moving forward to face the future is the way to go. You express this transition very well. Good luck on the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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What a positive take on a relationship that wasn't meant to be. Sweeping the swirling regrets from your mind, embracing the winds of change and moving forward to face the future is the way to go. You express this transition very well. Good luck on the contest.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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What a lovely review, Susan. I rarely post personal things but this actually happened to me last week. A very liberating experience. I appreciate these comments more than you know. Thank you!
Comment from Gloria ....
Very nicely constructed nonet, Linda. I like the resolution and the winds of change.
Fine, fine form with a little wistful love for good measure.
Wishing you much luck with the Contest Committee with this gem. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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Very nicely constructed nonet, Linda. I like the resolution and the winds of change.
Fine, fine form with a little wistful love for good measure.
Wishing you much luck with the Contest Committee with this gem. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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Lovely comments, Gloria. I'm glad you enjoyed this. This review is much appreciated. Thank you! Lynda
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
A very fine poem weaving a tapestry of pleasant memories, with a beautiful picture attached. I love the line " The breeze of your memory now warm." Lovely presentation.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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A very fine poem weaving a tapestry of pleasant memories, with a beautiful picture attached. I love the line " The breeze of your memory now warm." Lovely presentation.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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Lovely review, Raffaelina. (cool name!) Your comments are great and I appreciate your time. Thank you! Lynda
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Nonet a love relationship that went wrong but there is no point contemplating about what could have been but rather breath in deep and exploring new opportunities with the wind in you hair.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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A very well-written Nonet a love relationship that went wrong but there is no point contemplating about what could have been but rather breath in deep and exploring new opportunities with the wind in you hair.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Sandra. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Your comments are lovely and I appreciate your time to read and review this entry. Thanks! Lynda
Comment from poetwatch
Life is all about change, Lynda, from bad to good, from good to better, from better to best and then that in-between that's not so bad. :) I like your Nonet it speak of love and a needed change. Good to hear from you. :) Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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Life is all about change, Lynda, from bad to good, from good to better, from better to best and then that in-between that's not so bad. :) I like your Nonet it speak of love and a needed change. Good to hear from you. :) Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your time and I'm glad you enjoyed this. Baggage sucks. lol A welcome change, indeed. Thanks! Lynda
Comment from DragonSkulls
I'm glad to see you finally post something again, Lynda. It's been way too long. And then to top it off with this perfectly formed nonet. I'm happy to see you can let a passed relationship not let the woes of it hold more worth than the good. Excellent contest entry, L. I wish you the very best of luck. Great write. Have a great day.
DS
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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I'm glad to see you finally post something again, Lynda. It's been way too long. And then to top it off with this perfectly formed nonet. I'm happy to see you can let a passed relationship not let the woes of it hold more worth than the good. Excellent contest entry, L. I wish you the very best of luck. Great write. Have a great day.
DS
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Ron, for all those stars and lovely comments. This one was personal and after I wrote about it (and then posted it, lol) I felt a lot better. Eye opening experience. I'm glad you liked this. All of this much appreciated. Have a great day! Lynda
Comment from Diana L Crawford
oh my, what a positive uplifting poem! I'm loving this, sista! Cleaned out mind/soul and refreshed! New outlook on life! I'm rooting for this one! It's beautiful! It's a six, but don't have anymore :(
xoxo
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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oh my, what a positive uplifting poem! I'm loving this, sista! Cleaned out mind/soul and refreshed! New outlook on life! I'm rooting for this one! It's beautiful! It's a six, but don't have anymore :(
xoxo
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thank you, girl. This is actually something I personally experienced last week. Talk about therapy! LOL So I wanted to write about it as I thought it was so cool to have this happen to me. And nothing is really done until you post it, eh? Much appreciated, sweetie!
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Yeah, I got that feeling because of other things you have mentioned, so it was really nice to see such a beautiful "love myself" attitude from you!! makes me jump with joy, my friend!! :)
Comment from papa55mike
What a beautifully written poem, and the picture is stunning. Memories are a warm feeling that can be felt at anytime. Great Job.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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What a beautifully written poem, and the picture is stunning. Memories are a warm feeling that can be felt at anytime. Great Job.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much!! Your comments are lovely and I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this. I love what you wrote. Thank you again! Lynda
