Late Christmas Eve Night
Christmas story29 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
That was a lovely narrative about Santa and how he arrives and what he does. We all love what happens Christmas Eve, for the children especially. The picture is beautiful because we never tire of seeing Santa. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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That was a lovely narrative about Santa and how he arrives and what he does. We all love what happens Christmas Eve, for the children especially. The picture is beautiful because we never tire of seeing Santa. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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Santa lives in our hearts. I am a kid again when it comes to Christmas. Thank you, Raffaelina for the Review and stars.
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderful Christmas poem, I think this will relate to all and be especially enjoyed by the children, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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What a wonderful Christmas poem, I think this will relate to all and be especially enjoyed by the children, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Kahpot, for the encouraging review and stars.
Comment from Lobber
Hello,
A very cute, lovable and embraceable rendition of a very famous poem. I hope yours will be added to the long list of the many variations. Thank you. - Lobber
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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Hello,
A very cute, lovable and embraceable rendition of a very famous poem. I hope yours will be added to the long list of the many variations. Thank you. - Lobber
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Lobber, for your very nice review and stars.
Comment from Flyaway1
Great story and enjoyable to read. So I had a question- because I honestly would like to know. If you use punctuation, does it have to be through the whole poem. At times you used punctuation and at times you did not in this piece.
I think it would be easier for me to read, if you took all the punctuation out and just let it flow. But of course you could use the punctuation in each.stanza as if you were reading it to an audience.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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Great story and enjoyable to read. So I had a question- because I honestly would like to know. If you use punctuation, does it have to be through the whole poem. At times you used punctuation and at times you did not in this piece.
I think it would be easier for me to read, if you took all the punctuation out and just let it flow. But of course you could use the punctuation in each.stanza as if you were reading it to an audience.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
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Thank you, for your review. Sometimes I just get lazy on my punctuation. Thanks also, for the stars.
Comment from Barbaraj1
This is a very nice poem on your rendition of "Twas The Night Before
Christmas." You have done a great job with the images. They are
very vivid. The rhyming is good.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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This is a very nice poem on your rendition of "Twas The Night Before
Christmas." You have done a great job with the images. They are
very vivid. The rhyming is good.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Barbara , for your review and stars.
Comment from oliver818
Nice poem, I like the christmassy imagery you use. It flows well and creates a nice image of the Christmas time of year. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Nice poem, I like the christmassy imagery you use. It flows well and creates a nice image of the Christmas time of year. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Thank you
Comment from Sally Law
A good take and new twist on "The Night Before Christmas." Santa sighting are worth leaving bed for. Sending you my best today and best wishes for the contest.
Sally :)
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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A good take and new twist on "The Night Before Christmas." Santa sighting are worth leaving bed for. Sending you my best today and best wishes for the contest.
Sally :)
Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Sally, Many thanks for your review and stars.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Willie, and who dares to say that Santa Claus does not exist. You have just convinced me that he does LOL. A sweet story that every child should read. Good Luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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Hi Willie, and who dares to say that Santa Claus does not exist. You have just convinced me that he does LOL. A sweet story that every child should read. Good Luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Dorothy, for the very nice review and stars. Santa exists in our hearts.
Comment from Gail Denham
I remember well listening for the hoofbeats and the jingle of the harness on the roof. Lying there, holding my breath, anxious, eager for the man in the red suit to come visit. At times I was sure I heard it.
Good poem
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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I remember well listening for the hoofbeats and the jingle of the harness on the roof. Lying there, holding my breath, anxious, eager for the man in the red suit to come visit. At times I was sure I heard it.
Good poem
Comment Written 11-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your review and stars.
Comment from Cindy Warren
That's a fun take on 'The Night Before Christmas.' I can imagine you going outside in just a nightshirt to see the reindeer. A couple of years ago my son in law threw horse droppings on the roof to show the kids what the reindeer had done. Lots of fun.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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That's a fun take on 'The Night Before Christmas.' I can imagine you going outside in just a nightshirt to see the reindeer. A couple of years ago my son in law threw horse droppings on the roof to show the kids what the reindeer had done. Lots of fun.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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Thank you, Cindy, It would be too cold here in Idaho to go outside in
a night shirt. I love the horse droppings trick. Sounds like your son has quite a sense of humor.
