the scent of seasons
a poem7 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Senses Poetry contest.
You have described scents of the seasons very nicely.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Senses Poetry contest.
You have described scents of the seasons very nicely.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 04-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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Thanks for the encouraging review Sharon. I just love the signature scents of each season, like now I am smelling...snow!
Cheers.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-I like your poem, the
style, subject, and imagery.
-You effective describe each
season with images that
appeal to the "scents of the season."
-A nice way to end the poem
after the description of the
"chill scent of snow" and more.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-I like your poem, the
style, subject, and imagery.
-You effective describe each
season with images that
appeal to the "scents of the season."
-A nice way to end the poem
after the description of the
"chill scent of snow" and more.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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Thanks for the insightful review. I do love those signature scents of each unique season, cheers.
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You are very welcome. They are very unique; it was a great idea for your poem:)
Comment from zanya
Yes an interesting seasonal focused approach to the poetic theme of Senses reminding us of the sheer richness of aroma provided by Mother Nature - nice pic
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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Yes an interesting seasonal focused approach to the poetic theme of Senses reminding us of the sheer richness of aroma provided by Mother Nature - nice pic
Comment Written 03-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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Thanks for the review. I love those signature scents. Right now I am smelling snow haha, cheers.
Comment from Eve Vasa
Hello, nice to see you at FS today. Your poem has some lovely imagery that you use to describe the seasons through your senses. It flowed well and your publishing choices were very attractive. I enjoyed this verse's simplicity, it's not overworked with the life squeezed out of it, lol. Simplicity is the essence of good design in the fashion industry, and I think the same applies to writing. Nicely done.
I have no suggestion for improvement and would recommend your writing to other readers for review, cheers, Eve.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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Hello, nice to see you at FS today. Your poem has some lovely imagery that you use to describe the seasons through your senses. It flowed well and your publishing choices were very attractive. I enjoyed this verse's simplicity, it's not overworked with the life squeezed out of it, lol. Simplicity is the essence of good design in the fashion industry, and I think the same applies to writing. Nicely done.
I have no suggestion for improvement and would recommend your writing to other readers for review, cheers, Eve.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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Thanks for the encouraging review Eve. I just love those signature scents, even the snow. Cheers.
Comment from RodG
Your poem does a fine job of bringing to mind memories of each season. I am unhappy to be reminded of winter. I especially like the scents you used describing spring and summer. Rod
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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Your poem does a fine job of bringing to mind memories of each season. I am unhappy to be reminded of winter. I especially like the scents you used describing spring and summer. Rod
Comment Written 03-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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Thanks for the review. Yeah, winter...
Power is off in Quebec.
Hunkering down with big fire, warm blankets, DVDs and King Pao chicken. May as well have fun. Cheers.
Comment from Cindy Warren
I'm smelling snow today. I can't wait for spring and lilacs. I actually don't mind the smell of snow, I just don't like driving in it. Love the picture. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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I'm smelling snow today. I can't wait for spring and lilacs. I actually don't mind the smell of snow, I just don't like driving in it. Love the picture. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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Thanks for the review Cindy. I just love the signatures scents of each season, yeah even the snow, cheers.
Comment from Sallyo
Lovely! You fitted the poem to the prompt admirably and using scent is a somewhat "different" way of using senses. I was fascinated by the scent of snow, as if hardly ever snows here.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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Lovely! You fitted the poem to the prompt admirably and using scent is a somewhat "different" way of using senses. I was fascinated by the scent of snow, as if hardly ever snows here.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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Thanks for the review Sallyo. I just love those signatures scents of each season. Like lilacs and cut grass, it just time~travels me to happy times, cheers.
