Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

You know it's love when the word 'proofreader' brings to mind romantic thoughts...LOL! :) :) A wonderful offering for this limited format contest -- thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019

Thanks for the read and the response.

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

The alliteration you use with all of the s's shows how quieting your muse is for your composing. Your mind can be quiet thinking only of creative phrases. You have no worries, she's got your back. She's watching your six. What a lovely tribute to your helpmate, your loving wife. I hope you have shown this to her. I'm voting for this.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019

Thanks for the read and the comments. Of course, she has proofread.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Love Poem contest.
Your love for your wife and muse is clear.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019

Thanks much for your review and encouraging words.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

You are a most fortunate writer/husband to have such a helpmate. I like just the glimpse of her we are given--smiling at your door. Hope you share the prize with her when you win. Rod

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019

Always do; that's what keeps her smiling. Thanks for the read and comments.