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Viewing comments for Chapter 79 "Scene at the Mailbox"Pons and Ned meet at different locations
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Comment from Ulla
Hahaha, this is wonderful, Bill. he was so close to do everything by the book and then in the last minute, he failed the test. I loved it. You're so good at this. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2019
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Hahaha, this is wonderful, Bill. he was so close to do everything by the book and then in the last minute, he failed the test. I loved it. You're so good at this. Ulla:))
Comment Written 05-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much, Ulla.
Comment from brenda faye curtis
This was a good one, Bill! I especially liked the twist at the end of this being a practice run, and the even funnier twist after that of Davey failing the test.
It's perfect!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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This was a good one, Bill! I especially liked the twist at the end of this being a practice run, and the even funnier twist after that of Davey failing the test.
It's perfect!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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Thank you,Brenda.
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You're welcome, Bill.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! I'm pretty sure our country mailcarriers don't undergo any scrutiny whatsoever... :) :) But what a fun script, Bill -- something no one has probably never even considered! ;) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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LOL!! I'm pretty sure our country mailcarriers don't undergo any scrutiny whatsoever... :) :) But what a fun script, Bill -- something no one has probably never even considered! ;) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 04-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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Thanks, Yvette.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile Bill, after all that he hands over the mail anyway! He he he. I think I would have insisted in putting it in the mail box! We have mail delivered into our homes and no one can steal it! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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You made me smile Bill, after all that he hands over the mail anyway! He he he. I think I would have insisted in putting it in the mail box! We have mail delivered into our homes and no one can steal it! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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Thanks, Dolly, for the great review. Bill
Comment from Brian Hill
Almost Davey, almost
Great one act. Good conversation and visually laid out so you are there. Thank you for that ending. Loved the little twist.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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Almost Davey, almost
Great one act. Good conversation and visually laid out so you are there. Thank you for that ending. Loved the little twist.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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Thanks, Brian, for the great review. Bill
Comment from nancy_e_davis
HA. HA. Ha. He aced the test only to
blow it at the last minute. Isn't that
too bad? This was a fun read and a
unique idea. Well done, Bill. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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HA. HA. Ha. He aced the test only to
blow it at the last minute. Isn't that
too bad? This was a fun read and a
unique idea. Well done, Bill. Nancy:)
Comment Written 03-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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Thanks, Nancy, for the great review. Bill
Comment from JudyE
That's so clever but I have to pity the poor postman! He was trying so hard then still didn't pass the test. It hardly seems fair. That Mr Hamsterdam is a hard man.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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That's so clever but I have to pity the poor postman! He was trying so hard then still didn't pass the test. It hardly seems fair. That Mr Hamsterdam is a hard man.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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This is why people go postal.
Comment from Spitfire
Addressing them each by their own name at the end is brilliant and turned things around. I really laughed at this typical red tape dialogue.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Addressing them each by their own name at the end is brilliant and turned things around. I really laughed at this typical red tape dialogue.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Thanks, Shari, for the great review. Bill
Comment from nomi338
Poor Davey, he almost passed the test. Unfortunately he does not realize that close only counts in horseshoes and hand grenades. That Mr. Hamsterdam is a slippery and slick character.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Poor Davey, he almost passed the test. Unfortunately he does not realize that close only counts in horseshoes and hand grenades. That Mr. Hamsterdam is a slippery and slick character.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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This must be why folks go postal.
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You just may be right. It would certainly seem to be the likely case.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
LOL! You should have entered this one in the upcoming contest as it is REALLY delightful. It's well penned and thoroughly engaging as the conversation is one that certainly is probable - my carrier makes me wait until it's in the box and she knows who I am LOL. I enjoyed this immensely and thought the ending a wonderful twist. Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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LOL! You should have entered this one in the upcoming contest as it is REALLY delightful. It's well penned and thoroughly engaging as the conversation is one that certainly is probable - my carrier makes me wait until it's in the box and she knows who I am LOL. I enjoyed this immensely and thought the ending a wonderful twist. Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Thank you, MA. My carrier said this me too.
