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Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "It's Just a Matter of Time?"A Book of Horror and Honor.
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Comment from Lulube
I gave you 6 stars for graciously putting yourself in your sons body and mind to write for him. and not just this time, but the other times as well. it must be a painful transition. I;m sure Jason is proud of you sharing his story.
lulube
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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I gave you 6 stars for graciously putting yourself in your sons body and mind to write for him. and not just this time, but the other times as well. it must be a painful transition. I;m sure Jason is proud of you sharing his story.
lulube
Comment Written 05-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Thanks lulube.
I just posted my first piece and 68 days directionally what I call sister poems.
Ricky
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There you are! we all need some space from here that's for sure. HOPE YOUR x'MAS WAS FILLED WITH LAUGHTER AND GOOD FOOD.
lulube
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Unfortunately, I took a 68 day forced break.
Let's just say that sometimes I don't get along with Tom.
Ricky
Comment from country ranch writer
It is amazing how organ transplants can save so many lives in a matter of minutes. Time is of the Essenes and must be done quickly or so many will die waiting on the list.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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It is amazing how organ transplants can save so many lives in a matter of minutes. Time is of the Essenes and must be done quickly or so many will die waiting on the list.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Words true and thanks country ranch writer.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment from Sally Law
Thank you for sharing this important story and update on Jason"s organs. Four lives given life and years of happiness is a great gift. I'm glad I'm an organ donor after hearing this I wonder why more people don't take the time to do this. At 64, as far as I know, my organs are doing pretty great. I just need new retinas. I continue to pray for you and your great losses. It is overwhelming.
Sends you my best today as always,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Thank you for sharing this important story and update on Jason"s organs. Four lives given life and years of happiness is a great gift. I'm glad I'm an organ donor after hearing this I wonder why more people don't take the time to do this. At 64, as far as I know, my organs are doing pretty great. I just need new retinas. I continue to pray for you and your great losses. It is overwhelming.
Sends you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment Written 02-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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thanks Sally I just posted my first piece and 68 days sister comes that you might be interested in one is the same subject you're talkin about.
Ricky
Comment from glindaboy52
What a very emotional story and challenge this must have been to write. You beautifully expressed the progression of the physical body dying but yet organs being saved. I love how the Son is questioning what is happening to his Earthen vessel as he is in the midst of himself leaving this physical plane to that of the ethereal. Beautiful expression I'm sure it was a challenge to write this piece but you needed to write this hopefully this will give you strength to continue with the journey of life. A loving beautiful tribute to your son. It is also a loving beautiful tribute to life. Hopefully the organs that were able to be saved will save another's life. So personal, so meaningful, peace and blessings
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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What a very emotional story and challenge this must have been to write. You beautifully expressed the progression of the physical body dying but yet organs being saved. I love how the Son is questioning what is happening to his Earthen vessel as he is in the midst of himself leaving this physical plane to that of the ethereal. Beautiful expression I'm sure it was a challenge to write this piece but you needed to write this hopefully this will give you strength to continue with the journey of life. A loving beautiful tribute to your son. It is also a loving beautiful tribute to life. Hopefully the organs that were able to be saved will save another's life. So personal, so meaningful, peace and blessings
Comment Written 02-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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17 almost years later three out of four people walk this Earth still on no anti-rejection drugs because of Jason's gift.
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment from Ulla
Hi Ricky. I'm so glad that something good came out of Jason's tragic death. You written this very well and it is poignant. You have come a long way, Ricky. Thanks for sharing. All best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Hi Ricky. I'm so glad that something good came out of Jason's tragic death. You written this very well and it is poignant. You have come a long way, Ricky. Thanks for sharing. All best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Thanks again Ulla.
It's always a pleasure to see your reviews and have a beautiful New Year.
Ricky
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You deliver yet another well penned and vivid portrayal of that awful night so long ago. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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You deliver yet another well penned and vivid portrayal of that awful night so long ago. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Thanks again Mystic.
Ricky
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
No doubt, father is a doctor, his only son Jason gave no chance to care for him, he left for heaven, he donated his organ-tissue and gifted to one for a life; father has to bear all these at the loss of his son; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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No doubt, father is a doctor, his only son Jason gave no chance to care for him, he left for heaven, he donated his organ-tissue and gifted to one for a life; father has to bear all these at the loss of his son; well said, well done.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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Thanks again alcreator for your time and Review.
Ricky
Comment from Sanku
This is a poem about organ tissue transplantation.yOu have approached this sensitive topic with great dignity and have succeeded in writing a very hear touching poem with the boy's cold juxtaposed with the doc-nurse conversation.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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This is a poem about organ tissue transplantation.yOu have approached this sensitive topic with great dignity and have succeeded in writing a very hear touching poem with the boy's cold juxtaposed with the doc-nurse conversation.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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Thanks and my Son above?
Thanks you too.
Ricky
Comment from this_baet
This is really good. It also has a feature of sadness, and it's disheartening to think on the fact that yes, this indeed does happen. But why would his friend want to do that to him?
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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This is really good. It also has a feature of sadness, and it's disheartening to think on the fact that yes, this indeed does happen. But why would his friend want to do that to him?
Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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What I didn't put in the Palm West at Brian's mother was the administrator the sports department of Southern Regional high School she can have time for him just his younger brother and the father was an alcoholic + Brian wasn't liked by his friends he was mentally ill.
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment from Patty Palmer
I'm glad you wrote this. It's a real tribute to your son. So many lives you and your son have touched because of his organ donations. When our son passed away, his disease would have kept us from donating. I'm happy that Jason was able to help others live.
God bless!!
Patty
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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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I'm glad you wrote this. It's a real tribute to your son. So many lives you and your son have touched because of his organ donations. When our son passed away, his disease would have kept us from donating. I'm happy that Jason was able to help others live.
God bless!!
Patty
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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Sorry
Tell me more and are you alone too?
Ricky
