Elderlyitis
Elderlyitis contest entry7 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poetry. I enjoyed reading it. Although I feel that your last line could have been done differently. Good luck.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poetry. I enjoyed reading it. Although I feel that your last line could have been done differently. Good luck.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and review. I will go in to the poem and see what I can do. Dove
Comment from Apriori
A fun poem. I enjoyed reading all the awful varieties of -itis to which aging bodies might succumb to. Best wishes for a successful outcome in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2019
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A fun poem. I enjoyed reading all the awful varieties of -itis to which aging bodies might succumb to. Best wishes for a successful outcome in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2019
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Dear Apryor, Thank you for your review and best wishes.
Comment from Bill Pinder
Thanks for sharing this humorous poem about elderlytis. That's not easy to say. Yes the older we get, we become personally acquainted with more itises. Good luck to us all.
Bill
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2019
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Thanks for sharing this humorous poem about elderlytis. That's not easy to say. Yes the older we get, we become personally acquainted with more itises. Good luck to us all.
Bill
Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2019
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Dear Bill, Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about getting old we gather illnesses and conditions like candy that we may not eat because we have diabetes.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2019
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A very well-written poem about getting old we gather illnesses and conditions like candy that we may not eat because we have diabetes.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2019
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your compliment and review.
Comment from Janetsue
LOL This is very funny...and rattling skeleton's fit right in with the little goblins coming around tonight for Halloween goodies. You've posted a super entry for the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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LOL This is very funny...and rattling skeleton's fit right in with the little goblins coming around tonight for Halloween goodies. You've posted a super entry for the contest!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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Dear Spangle, Thank you for your comments, review and compliment
Comment from Cindy Warren
Ah yes, it's creeping up on me too. Sometimes it feels more like a freight train than a snail. I don't want to get any older, but what's the alternative?
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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Ah yes, it's creeping up on me too. Sometimes it feels more like a freight train than a snail. I don't want to get any older, but what's the alternative?
Comment Written 31-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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Dear Cindy, Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from lauralumummu
This is humorous if you are of a certain age, lol. Some people say you are as old as you feel. I prefer you are as old as you think you are. My husband says he thinks he's about sixteen. I think he is in his second childhood
All the best in the contest. Well done!
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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This is humorous if you are of a certain age, lol. Some people say you are as old as you feel. I prefer you are as old as you think you are. My husband says he thinks he's about sixteen. I think he is in his second childhood
All the best in the contest. Well done!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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Dear lauralumummu, Thank you for your comments and review, and for your compliments and wishing me best in the contest.
