Creating Tomorrows Horror
Are Our Selfish Needs17 total reviews
Comment from Cybertron1986
That's a deep and accurate interpretation of what is happening in the world today...especially, in first world countries where education, resources, and money are being used preferentially. I love the philosophy depicted here. Yes. Monsters do exist.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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That's a deep and accurate interpretation of what is happening in the world today...especially, in first world countries where education, resources, and money are being used preferentially. I love the philosophy depicted here. Yes. Monsters do exist.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Wow! Thank you very much I am very glad you rad this as I try to write it, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Oh, wow, powerful truth here. Whatever those monsters are, we parents generally play a role in their creation, both tangible and intangible. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Oh, wow, powerful truth here. Whatever those monsters are, we parents generally play a role in their creation, both tangible and intangible. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much, and yes we must look after our children's future****kahpot
Comment from Sanku
WoW! There is the implied horror of future world that out children will have to face .we have created monsters and our children can not even see what is in for them.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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WoW! There is the implied horror of future world that out children will have to face .we have created monsters and our children can not even see what is in for them.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much, and yes we must look after our children's future****kahpot
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written thirteen-word horror poem. Indeed the leaders of the world are busy creating a future of horror and uncertainty to the youth of today.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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A very well-written thirteen-word horror poem. Indeed the leaders of the world are busy creating a future of horror and uncertainty to the youth of today.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from oliver818
This is an interesting and disturbing poem. I like that you deliberately leave it vague as to what is actually going on here. The poem is succinct and flows well: thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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This is an interesting and disturbing poem. I like that you deliberately leave it vague as to what is actually going on here. The poem is succinct and flows well: thanks for sharing
Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is much truth in your words here. Bringing children up is not easy and they can be easily scarred by our treatment of them. We ourselves are scarred by our own upbringing and breaking the cycle of harm can be difficult. Your words are emotional and honest, this is the true horror in life, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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There is much truth in your words here. Bringing children up is not easy and they can be easily scarred by our treatment of them. We ourselves are scarred by our own upbringing and breaking the cycle of harm can be difficult. Your words are emotional and honest, this is the true horror in life, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much and yes we must look after our children's future****kahpot
Comment from Ricky1024
"Creating Tomorrow's Horror is a 13 Word Horror Poetry Contest Entry"
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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"Creating Tomorrow's Horror is a 13 Word Horror Poetry Contest Entry"
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review and comments****kahpot
