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Poetry at it's finest.

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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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Yes, the pain of a broken heart is not easily mended once the fracture takes hold. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
    I have about a dozen subjects I like writing on like time the Earth life death but writing about the heart seems to have touched me the most since I have several books on the subject course not publish my work does not compel dishes to share here at this point in time.
    Thanks again.
    Ricky
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I think you mean:

"My Life is (too) demure"

You should remove the inverted commas Ricky as your words would stand out more and make it easier to read.

A poem from the heart here.

Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
    Thanks a million.
    Ricky
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Can you tell us more about your son's organ that you donated? It's obvious it's a heart who will live on in another person's body. What a miraculous act to have done. Prayers.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
    "Time After Time"
    Will tell you all dear.
    Ricky
Comment from dovemarie
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Dear Ricky, good red background that blends in with your talking about a Heart. You and your son will always be "Heart to Heart." I loved the picture too, with all the colors radiating out from it. Dove

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
    Thanks Dove.
    And, read the follow up Entitled...
    "Time After Time"
    Ricky
Comment from Sugarray77
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Your vivid poem is well written and conveys a heartfelt message. I read your notes and extend my sympathy for your loss. May the Lord and Saviour be your comfort. Well written.

Melissa

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
    Thanks Miss Melissa,
    Always a pleasure.
    Ricky
Comment from brenda bickers
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Hi Ricky,
it is sad to know that you still yearn for your son, but I like that you recognise that 'Heart to Heart' you are still connected. Nothing can take that away from you.
This was nicely written.
Brenda.x

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
    "Fatherly Loss?"
    "Heart so Blue?"
    "I can't help it but to still...
    Continue...
    *Love"n You ..
    *You: n.
    person, significant other.
    *Editor's Note:
    Father to son's bond is extremely strong...
    Mother to daughters bond is extremely strong...
    Fathers to daughters bond is extremely strong...
    And, a Mother's to sons Bond is so extremely strong ..
    That she took her life to care for him...
    Thanks,
    RIcky
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Feeling about loss of a son, so sadly and as if destined, now comes to a bereaved father so, love of a father makes a father to think and feel so, heart to heart; well said, well done.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
    Thanks alcreator.
    Ricky