The Mums Bush
Syllable count 5-7-510 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Your 5-7-5 flower poem is very nice and description is enhanced in meaning with the inclusion of the vibrant illustration. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Your 5-7-5 flower poem is very nice and description is enhanced in meaning with the inclusion of the vibrant illustration. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 05-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Hi Marilyn! Hope you're feel energized from your guests. The holiday season is just gearing up. You're nice. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your vivid description of long-lasting chrysanthemums in this 5-7-5. The matching artwork you selected is the perfect reinforcement. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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I admired your vivid description of long-lasting chrysanthemums in this 5-7-5. The matching artwork you selected is the perfect reinforcement. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
Comment Written 02-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Thank you. Have a great weekend :)
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Flower contest.
I like that you've described chrysanthemums in autumn, but I don't understand the last line.
Good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Flower contest.
I like that you've described chrysanthemums in autumn, but I don't understand the last line.
Good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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Hi Sharon! The last line, the mums carry a rosy glow (rosiness). Thank you :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You painted a beautiful red picture here with your words, those delightful chrysanthemums pleasing our eye, very pretty, much enjoyed . . . . love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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You painted a beautiful red picture here with your words, those delightful chrysanthemums pleasing our eye, very pretty, much enjoyed . . . . love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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Hi Dolly! Thank you :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Truly, in autumn months, we feel happy to see and watch the beauty in Nature, red chrysanthemums hold rosiness all around there, well said, well done.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
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Truly, in autumn months, we feel happy to see and watch the beauty in Nature, red chrysanthemums hold rosiness all around there, well said, well done.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
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Thank you
Happy Halloween :)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables and vividly described
those beautiful fall flowers. I placed pots of yellow mums in front of our church. Red is lovely too. One thing: "Hold" should not have an "s."
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables and vividly described
those beautiful fall flowers. I placed pots of yellow mums in front of our church. Red is lovely too. One thing: "Hold" should not have an "s."
Comment Written 30-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
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Hi! I like all the colors of mums. The rarely see them pure red. All yellow would look lovely at an entrance. Thank you. Happy Halloween :)
Comment from NickieT
This is a lovely entry for the flower prompt. The photo is so vibrant! You syllables have a nice rhythm and it ties together well. Best of luck with this poem =)
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
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This is a lovely entry for the flower prompt. The photo is so vibrant! You syllables have a nice rhythm and it ties together well. Best of luck with this poem =)
Comment Written 30-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
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Thank you
Happy Halloween
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count
and imagery are effective.
-A good beginning with
the "red chrysanthemums."
-I don't think I have
seen a red one.
-Good description and
effective concluding line
that relates back to the beginning.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count
and imagery are effective.
-A good beginning with
the "red chrysanthemums."
-I don't think I have
seen a red one.
-Good description and
effective concluding line
that relates back to the beginning.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
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Red is a rare find for me outside of FanArtReview. Crimson, yellow and white are popular. Thank you. Happy Halloween :)
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You are welcome, and thanks for sharing about the flower.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a technically sound 5-7-5 with correct line and syllable count throughout. The content is timely as this flower is hitting its zenith right now and soon to succumb to the frost not long off. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a technically sound 5-7-5 with correct line and syllable count throughout. The content is timely as this flower is hitting its zenith right now and soon to succumb to the frost not long off. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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Thank you
Happy Autumn :)
Comment from Gloria ....
Mums truly are gorgeous flowers and supreme blossomers in cooler months.
Excellent fiveseventyfive and all good rosiness to you in the voting booth. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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Mums truly are gorgeous flowers and supreme blossomers in cooler months.
Excellent fiveseventyfive and all good rosiness to you in the voting booth. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 30-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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Thank you
Happy Autumn
