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Viewing comments for Chapter 80 "Scene at an Audition"Pons and Ned meet at different locations
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Comment from sunnilicious
That was a cute script. I have taken an improv classes and auditioned in the style a few times. It's great finding out what can come out of a person in a moments notice. Nice work :)
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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That was a cute script. I have taken an improv classes and auditioned in the style a few times. It's great finding out what can come out of a person in a moments notice. Nice work :)
Comment Written 30-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Sunnilicious, for the great review. Bill
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Okay, so the group has trouble following clear direction which we already knew from previous escapades LOL. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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Okay, so the group has trouble following clear direction which we already knew from previous escapades LOL. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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They are an improbable gathering.
Comment from nomi338
Anything that ends with a beer will cause me to cheer. Hear, hear my dear, let's all retire and have a cold beer. It sounds to me like most of the guys lean slightly toward the rap game, interesting.
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Anything that ends with a beer will cause me to cheer. Hear, hear my dear, let's all retire and have a cold beer. It sounds to me like most of the guys lean slightly toward the rap game, interesting.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2019
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They are a talented group.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and well written script. You used very cute and funny dialogue like you usually do. You have some funny characters in this one. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very cute and well written script. You used very cute and funny dialogue like you usually do. You have some funny characters in this one. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 30-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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Thanks, Teri
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you are so welcome!
Comment from judiverse
We can't hear their voices, but I like Pons's lines the best. I always hated when we were called on to do improv at an audition. One time we had to pretend to be mushroom hunting. I'd rather just read from the script. Leave it to Ned to hear "bear" for "beer." Jiff seems to favor a love scene. Not sure about the purpose of this. judi
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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We can't hear their voices, but I like Pons's lines the best. I always hated when we were called on to do improv at an audition. One time we had to pretend to be mushroom hunting. I'd rather just read from the script. Leave it to Ned to hear "bear" for "beer." Jiff seems to favor a love scene. Not sure about the purpose of this. judi
Comment Written 30-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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Thanks for giving it a look, Judi. I'm pushing these characters towards an eventual rat-pack-ish story.
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You're welcome. judi
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Great! Some had their own interpretation, but Pons and Matt played it straight. I can't pick one I like best. Good thing I don't have to choose an actor. LOL! :)
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Great! Some had their own interpretation, but Pons and Matt played it straight. I can't pick one I like best. Good thing I don't have to choose an actor. LOL! :)
Comment Written 30-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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Pons and Matt are the straight arrows for sure.
Comment from lyenochka
I was puzzled by the song references given to each of the characters in the cast listing. Or maybe it was only a couple of them. Anchor Hocking is a brand of glasses. Matt seems to say the same thing as Pons. Others were more inventive. I'm with Pez, waiting for the beer, please.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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I was puzzled by the song references given to each of the characters in the cast listing. Or maybe it was only a couple of them. Anchor Hocking is a brand of glasses. Matt seems to say the same thing as Pons. Others were more inventive. I'm with Pez, waiting for the beer, please.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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Not my greatest achievement.
