Out Standing Stories and Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "The Rescue!"A Book of Horror and Honor.
5 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Oh my! An insane Disney Princess - does this mean she has been downgraded to a Looney Tunes character? Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Oh my! An insane Disney Princess - does this mean she has been downgraded to a Looney Tunes character? Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Thanks and glad you like this when I can't remember too much what it was about cuz I'm doing reviews there over 2 months old since I had problems here on this site and haven't posted in 68 days.
Ricky
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Author, I am trying to find something original to say about your work. I think this the first piece that I have read of your work, as I am new to Fan Story, and am reading all I can to become acquainted with all the writers that contribute to FanStory. As soon as I have finished writing this review, I am going to look at your portfolio to see what other things you write about other than fairytale characters who slay secondary bad guys while the chief villain gets away!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
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Dear Author, I am trying to find something original to say about your work. I think this the first piece that I have read of your work, as I am new to Fan Story, and am reading all I can to become acquainted with all the writers that contribute to FanStory. As soon as I have finished writing this review, I am going to look at your portfolio to see what other things you write about other than fairytale characters who slay secondary bad guys while the chief villain gets away!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
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Thanks and read...
"Time After Time"
Ricky
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Hooray for the Prince -- and I see that he had some help from Doc there, hmmm? :) :) An very original twist that leaves the door open for the Queen to continue her madness with a new minion! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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Hooray for the Prince -- and I see that he had some help from Doc there, hmmm? :) :) An very original twist that leaves the door open for the Queen to continue her madness with a new minion! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)
Comment Written 30-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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Glad you liked this.
I actually like the Evil Queen the most.
But as a kid?
Scared to death of the Wicked Witch of the West!
Ricky
Comment from Darlene Franklin
There is so much to like about this story: the way Valliant relies on the wisdom of the dwarves to save Snow White, for example. Unforunately, the poor grammar makes it difficult to enjoy it. Two repeated problems I noticed: using "are" (verb) instead of "our" (pronoun) when referring to Snow White. And nearly all the sentences end with a question mark. Having said that, I am curious as to what mischief the evil queen will be up to next.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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There is so much to like about this story: the way Valliant relies on the wisdom of the dwarves to save Snow White, for example. Unforunately, the poor grammar makes it difficult to enjoy it. Two repeated problems I noticed: using "are" (verb) instead of "our" (pronoun) when referring to Snow White. And nearly all the sentences end with a question mark. Having said that, I am curious as to what mischief the evil queen will be up to next.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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The question marks are to give thought and add presents to the peace and also I never take Stars away for any sort of grammar issues I sometimes will tell them about them but I do not chastise just my own personal thoughts.
Note this may have run in sentences and grammar issues
Comment from sunnilicious
Scary story but perfect for the Halloween season. Well thought out and clearly written. Good visual imageries as you were creative. Good narration mixed with dialogue. Good spin on and old tale.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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Scary story but perfect for the Halloween season. Well thought out and clearly written. Good visual imageries as you were creative. Good narration mixed with dialogue. Good spin on and old tale.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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The first to are also posted.
Better to get the "Truer Picture"
Thanks,
Ricky
