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We Demand Reconciliation

Government officials please do your job!

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Comment from Cedar
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Your entry carries a very strong message. A message that surely every red-blooded American agrees with.

However, in my opinion, I fear that it might be too late. Our president has turned so many of our long-standing allies into enemies and I doubt seriously if we will ever recover from that, regardless, who is president.

And, at the same time, he has befriended our mortal enemies.

What in the hell is happening to "America, the great?"

Good luck in the contest, my friend...Bill

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
    Bill, We must not give up and certainly not give in this great country really has survived many setbacks. The people will wake up and vote and take back the out of control government before She goes under
reply by Cedar on 30-Oct-2019
    No, I would never give up or give in on our great country. I was born during the second world war and I served in the United States Air Force all over southeast Asia during the Vietnam war. After all that, I went to work for the United States Army at Fort Knox, Ky for nearly 30 years.

    So, needless to say, I would die fighting for her. It just really bothers me having "A__holes" like we have now sitting in our Whitehouse...

    Have a great day...Bill
reply by Cedar on 30-Oct-2019
    No, I would never give up or give in on our great country. I was born during the second world war and I served in the United States Air Force all over southeast Asia during the Vietnam war. After all that, I went to work for the United States Army at Fort Knox, Ky for nearly 30 years.

    So, needless to say, I would die fighting for her. It just really bothers me having "A__holes" like we have now sitting in our Whitehouse...

    Have a great day...Bill
Comment from the13thpoet
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A wonderful Wednesday to you fellow poet. First and foremost I want to say AMEN to that! Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
    My friend, thank you, I needed to get that off my chest... I believe we are collectively a much better people than we see, hear or read about in the papers on the airwaves. It is imperative that we vote and then regardless of outcomes we must become cohesive and back our elected leaders and exact, NO DEMAND, they do the same.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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If you didn't hit the nail on the head. How true! Your poem tells our government how it should be! When we elect these officials we elect them to govern our nation for the good of everybody.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
    Rosemary, thank you for being so kind with your thoughts and excellent six-star recognition.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
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I agree with you fully. You caught me with your first line: Dear Democrats or Republicans. The two major parties are so busy trying to control that they can't work together. In fact, they almost seem to hate one another. I wish you could send that poem to every politician, esp. in D.C., with all of our signatures!

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
    Darlene! thank you, if we could only get the registered populace out to yote, one-time for change and just the dice roll at least we would be, I believe, have a chance to fix this. I have friends of all political persuasions and they ALL are saying the same thing....makes you wonder..
reply by Darlene Franklin on 30-Oct-2019
    Yes! Because while I dislike Trump and his policies, and I'm a registered Democrat, I don't like the way the Dems are handling the problems. Attack instead of presenting a better alternative, you know? I like your idea about the vote, lol
Comment from Helena Frances
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Yes, yes, and yes! We have strayed far from the ideals meant to be upheld.
Cynicism, fear, and intolerance have replaced, unity, equality, and ethics.
I am hopeful that the climate (actual and political) can be changed for the better.
Best wishes in the contest. Your Nonet is clever and thoughtful.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
    Helena, thank you for your enthusiastic recognition. I am so grateful for the six-star rating.
Comment from Gloria ....
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Really a neat piece of artwork and a fine nonet too. It's a lovely sentiment and perhaps when people have exhausted all other alternatives they will start being reasonable, but I wouldn't hold my breath waiting for it happen anytime soon. :)

Good luck to you in the voting booth.

Gloria

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
    Gloria, thank you
Comment from Bill Schott
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This nonet, We Demand Reconciliation, has the proper nine to one descending syllable formatting and asks what needs to happen. The polarization must cease and compromise be the rule of government.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
    Bill thank you
Comment from Janetsue
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This is an excellent posting about a vital subject. We have two parties that need to agree on what 'progress' means and then work together to achieve it. It is presently in a sad state of affairs and this helps bring attention to the matter.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
    Spangle, thank you. If only those in power would read this, more importantly, understand and take action.
reply by Janetsue on 30-Oct-2019
    So true!
Comment from 24chas
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A nice thought but it will never happen I don't think. The people of this country can't agree on much right now so I don't see it happening. Nice job on the form. Good luck.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
    Thanks, I do not want to believe it will not happen, to give up hope is to leave this life with my grandchildren suffering from our politician's ineptitude to speak out and reclaim this country.
Comment from nomi338
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In other words, that you act decently toward each other and conduct yourselves as someone deserving of citizenship in this great nation. May we never forget that this entire earth belongs to the one who created it, and who graciously allows us to occupy it. When we are gone from the physical earth and from the memory of most folks, this earth will still be here and will be occupied by someone else. Someone who may not look like us, think like us or believe as we do, and we won't be able to do a darn thing about it.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
    Nomi, I am lockstep right with you. I confess I do not know God's plan, other than to save the righteous believers who have accepted the one true "I AM". However, I am quite concerned that we are headed toward anarchy and that worries me.