Outran
A 13 word horror story16 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
Ewww, you set the theme up nicely and do wonders in this 13 word verse. Great job and presentation of a well known horror story. Good luck Christine.
Melissa
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Ewww, you set the theme up nicely and do wonders in this 13 word verse. Great job and presentation of a well known horror story. Good luck Christine.
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Hi Melissa Thanks for reading my late night effort LOL This is what a I get up too when I can?t sleep Ha Ha nothing like a good walk however I will stay indoors tonight Cheers For tour good luck too Chris
Comment from lyenochka
You did a great job in showing the typical dramatic chase scene in a horror type movie. And all done in just the thirteen words. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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You did a great job in showing the typical dramatic chase scene in a horror type movie. And all done in just the thirteen words. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Hi Helen Thanks for reading and I thought this might make the grade 13 words not much room to move LOL Still had fun late at night Cheers Chris
Comment from Ricky1024
"Outran"
"Is a 13 Word Horror Poetry Contest Entry"
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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"Outran"
"Is a 13 Word Horror Poetry Contest Entry"
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
...
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 29-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Hi Ricky Thanks for your review for Outran just a late at night entry A fun challenge to make it in 13 words Stay indoors tonight LOL Cheers Christine
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
You nailed it in thirteen words. Without the picture, it gives its own image and one that is perfectly thought. Very well done and if I could vote, it would be for this one
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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You nailed it in thirteen words. Without the picture, it gives its own image and one that is perfectly thought. Very well done and if I could vote, it would be for this one
Comment Written 29-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Hi Barb Thanks so much for your encouraging review I never win any committee contest so I wont hold my breath but your vote is welcome. A fun challenge To do when unable to sleep Ha Ha Cheers Chris.
Hope all is well with youx
Comment from Cindy Warren
It's a good thing I'm not reading your little bedtime story at bedtime! I'd be imagining things creeping up behind me. Love the picture. It's a perfect match for this. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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It's a good thing I'm not reading your little bedtime story at bedtime! I'd be imagining things creeping up behind me. Love the picture. It's a perfect match for this. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Hi Cindy Thanks for reading anyway I couldn?t sleep and thought I would have a go at a contest and this one came up LOL yes stay indoors Tonight Cheers Chris
Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
Woo hoo, you hit the spot with this delightfully scary poem which you crafted so well in only 13 words! I so enjoyed it. If you've entered this, you will be a great contender. Thanks for the scary thrill!
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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Woo hoo, you hit the spot with this delightfully scary poem which you crafted so well in only 13 words! I so enjoyed it. If you've entered this, you will be a great contender. Thanks for the scary thrill!
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Comment Written 29-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Hi Marilyn
thanks so much for your great review and positive comments for Outran and yes not much in 13 words but hope this created the scare of being followed Stay safe Cheer Christine
