Haiku review: Crocodile Dundee
An Aussie with a big knife.19 total reviews
Comment from pome lover
that is great! deserves a 6!
cute as can be. Good rhymes, but excellent points made.
Cute picture, too.
Congratulations on winning the contest. good job.
Kathaine - pome lover
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that is great! deserves a 6!
cute as can be. Good rhymes, but excellent points made.
Cute picture, too.
Congratulations on winning the contest. good job.
Kathaine - pome lover
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku movie review, Crocodile Dundee, uses a 5-7-5 format and adds a uni-rhyme scheme while reducing the gist of the Australian movie to its essentials. Neat.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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This haiku movie review, Crocodile Dundee, uses a 5-7-5 format and adds a uni-rhyme scheme while reducing the gist of the Australian movie to its essentials. Neat.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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Thanks for your review, Bill.
Comment from judester
Good one and congratulation on the win. I just watched this again recently and loved his simplistic take on every day situations. G'day, judester
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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Good one and congratulation on the win. I just watched this again recently and loved his simplistic take on every day situations. G'day, judester
Comment Written 31-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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Sorry for my delay in responding - I was away. I very much appreciate your review.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this descriptive commentary on that wildly popular movie. I barely remember watching it.
Yes, he got his woman on-screen and off. I think he left his wife for Kozlowski (spelling?).
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this descriptive commentary on that wildly popular movie. I barely remember watching it.
Yes, he got his woman on-screen and off. I think he left his wife for Kozlowski (spelling?).
Comment Written 30-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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He left a long marriage for his leading lady in the film, tsk tsk - how often that happens!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Movie Review contest.
You've outlined the Crocodile Dundee movie very well in so few words.
Nicely done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Movie Review contest.
You've outlined the Crocodile Dundee movie very well in so few words.
Nicely done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 30-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your review!
Comment from Aussie
Good on ya' cobber. We aren't all like him. We are most civilised and he was what we call a 'yobbo'. He's still married to that sheila. In its heyday, it was a funny movie. I hope the US doesn't think we act like Dundee!
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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Good on ya' cobber. We aren't all like him. We are most civilised and he was what we call a 'yobbo'. He's still married to that sheila. In its heyday, it was a funny movie. I hope the US doesn't think we act like Dundee!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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Geez mate, those yanks think we all run round wrestlin' crocs and talkin' weird.
Comment from Dancemom
I like your film choice. The description in Haiku form is very clever while also perfectly describing the plot. The picture is an excellent choice to go with the words.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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I like your film choice. The description in Haiku form is very clever while also perfectly describing the plot. The picture is an excellent choice to go with the words.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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Thanks very much for your review, Heather.
Sorry for my delay in responding - I was away.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. This is a really good poem and I like the fact that you added rhyme to your 5-7-5. I stopped writing that style because everyone told me I always broke the rules. Content is more important than style. You did a great job telling your story in rhyme.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
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Hello mystery writer. This is a really good poem and I like the fact that you added rhyme to your 5-7-5. I stopped writing that style because everyone told me I always broke the rules. Content is more important than style. You did a great job telling your story in rhyme.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
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Thanks, Robert. Other people thought it was a good poem too - it won!
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I'm glad for you.
Comment from lauralumummu
I love this its one of my favorite movies. I love the picture too. You really nailed it. Good luck in the contest! All the best Laura--------------------
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
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I love this its one of my favorite movies. I love the picture too. You really nailed it. Good luck in the contest! All the best Laura--------------------
Comment Written 29-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your review - I was really pleased this poem won the contest!
Comment from Mark D. R.
I so enjoyed that movie. And now I can enjoy your 5-7-5 review of the same.
Did like your rhyming.
NY has seen it all. So the shock of his visit to the city was not so unusual (-; Dundee apparently went with the flow and didn't find any crocs in the sewers. LOL
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
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I so enjoyed that movie. And now I can enjoy your 5-7-5 review of the same.
Did like your rhyming.
NY has seen it all. So the shock of his visit to the city was not so unusual (-; Dundee apparently went with the flow and didn't find any crocs in the sewers. LOL
Comment Written 29-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
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Thanks for reviewing. Voters must have liked this poem too - it won!
