Comment from Mistydawn

Exceptional

That was one very suspenseful chapter start to finish. The snow hole was a great idea. I just hope they don't freeze to death or discovered. It's very well-written, had me on the edge of my seat beginning to end.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019

Thanks, Misty. I appreciate your supportive comments and the sixth star. Delighted that this is still holding your attention!

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Exceptional

You did a wonderful job describing the emotion and the fear they felt. I felt is as I read. I do hope they make it out all right. Of course, they will you need them to continue the story. LOL I really like this story. It's the best on FS.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019

Thanks for your supportive comments, Barbara, and for the sixth star. Very much appreciated. Yes, I think I?d better keep them alive - at least for a little while! LOL All good wishes, Tony.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Another excellent episode Tony, the story and its descriptive path has taken on fantastic and very interesting storytelling proportions. The images you've portrayed are quite outstanding. Your ability as a writer seem to have increased exponentially Tony, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019

Thanks for your continued support and encouragement, Roy. Very much appreciated. Best wishes, Tony.

reply by royowen on 27-Oct-2019

Well done

Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Tony, this is yet another amazing chapter and I've just used up my last six. All in one day? That's too bad, but so be it. This is good writing indeed and so full of suspense. But what now? They're safe in the cave for now but what come morning? All best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019

Very many thanks, Ulla. I?m delighted that you thought this worth a sixth star. Glad you?re still enjoying it. Best wishes, Tony.

Comment from Bill Pinder

Excellent

This was an interesting chapter to read as they fight for their lives due to a critical incident where they were almost killed. That would take some good training to know how to survive overnight buried in the snow.
Bill

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 Comment Written 27-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019

Thanks, Bill. I?m glad it came across well. I appreciate your comments. Best wishes, Tony

Comment from lauralumummu

Excellent

Amazing story, I would love to read the whole book. You are a great writer, I rarely read something on here, that is this long but your story really holds my attention. All the best. Laura

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 Comment Written 27-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019

Thanks very much for dropping by to review this chapter, Laura. I appreciate your supportive comments. Best wishes, Tony