Favorite Short Stories, Vol. 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Doctor Scream"an eclectic fiction collection, old and new
17 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Oh dear, Dawn, this is everybody's nightmare or at least a lot of women's. So he totally fooled her and for that she was to pay with her life. Very well written and good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
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Oh dear, Dawn, this is everybody's nightmare or at least a lot of women's. So he totally fooled her and for that she was to pay with her life. Very well written and good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 30-Oct-2019
Comment from Y. M. Roger
This type writings always make my skin crawl -- you did a good job with it, Dawn...! ;) Thanx for sharing! :) :) Yvette :)
P.S. Sorry so far behind -- was a full past three days of family matters with the boys that needed tending to .... and now it's time to catch up with school! ;) :) Take care! ;)
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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This type writings always make my skin crawl -- you did a good job with it, Dawn...! ;) Thanx for sharing! :) :) Yvette :)
P.S. Sorry so far behind -- was a full past three days of family matters with the boys that needed tending to .... and now it's time to catch up with school! ;) :) Take care! ;)
Comment Written 28-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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LOL. Thanks very much. :)) Never worry about being behind with me -- I am always behind!
Comment from CD Richards
Poor Sheila. That reminds me of the worst pickup line ever... "does this handkerchief smell like chloroform to you?" I hope she doesn't end up as a lampshade. A fine horror tale for the contest, it certainly made my flesh crawl. Me and Sheila both. Best of luck -- Craig
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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Poor Sheila. That reminds me of the worst pickup line ever... "does this handkerchief smell like chloroform to you?" I hope she doesn't end up as a lampshade. A fine horror tale for the contest, it certainly made my flesh crawl. Me and Sheila both. Best of luck -- Craig
Comment Written 28-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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Hahaha! Thank you so much, Craig.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written scary Halloween story about the job offer that was nothing but a scam to get his dirty hands on the most beautiful girls and have his pleasure when he hears them scream.
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A very well-written scary Halloween story about the job offer that was nothing but a scam to get his dirty hands on the most beautiful girls and have his pleasure when he hears them scream.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2019
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Ew. Triple Ew. I think this is definitely a contender in the flash fiction contest. And it brings back memories of "House of Wax" to an extent, the really old one. Quite the post! Good luck in the contest.
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Ew. Triple Ew. I think this is definitely a contender in the flash fiction contest. And it brings back memories of "House of Wax" to an extent, the really old one. Quite the post! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
Comment from Joan E.
From the scene of a cozy cabin, this story quickly evolved into suspenseful horror. Dean would be proud of your use of the genre to engage the reader! Best wishes in the Flash Fiction contest- Joan
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From the scene of a cozy cabin, this story quickly evolved into suspenseful horror. Dean would be proud of your use of the genre to engage the reader! Best wishes in the Flash Fiction contest- Joan
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
Comment from Ricky1024
"Doctor Scream is a Halloween Poetry Contest Entry"
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a great weekend.
Ricky
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"Doctor Scream is a Halloween Poetry Contest Entry"
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a great weekend.
Ricky
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
Comment from l.raven
OMG Sweet Girl, should do awesome in the Halloween Flash Fiction contest...you just can't trust men...LOL...they always mess up a good thing...I love your story told you...and love the picture...very well written...EEEKKKKKK...love you...Linda xxoo
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OMG Sweet Girl, should do awesome in the Halloween Flash Fiction contest...you just can't trust men...LOL...they always mess up a good thing...I love your story told you...and love the picture...very well written...EEEKKKKKK...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Okay, on the horror scale, Dawn this is a six rating. You have a very good chance of winning with this. So much fright in one short story. I was aghast! Good luck my friend, I thought the conclusion was the ultimate in our worst dreams, LOL Giddy
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Okay, on the horror scale, Dawn this is a six rating. You have a very good chance of winning with this. So much fright in one short story. I was aghast! Good luck my friend, I thought the conclusion was the ultimate in our worst dreams, LOL Giddy
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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LOL! You, my friend, are spoiling me (and I love it)! Thank you so much, Giddy. I am positively thrilled!!!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
OOOHHH you did indeed fulfill the contest entry. A little bit of horror mixed with a dab of ending humor. Good luck and I love your profile picture. ..
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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OOOHHH you did indeed fulfill the contest entry. A little bit of horror mixed with a dab of ending humor. Good luck and I love your profile picture. ..
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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:)) Thanks, Barb.
