haiku review (Jaws)
Is it safe to go back in the water yet?13 total reviews
Comment from Susan X Smith
This poem is a potentially successful contest entry. It meets the format set out in the guidelines. I especially liked the punning last line. The picture adds much to the words.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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This poem is a potentially successful contest entry. It meets the format set out in the guidelines. I especially liked the punning last line. The picture adds much to the words.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your complimentary review, Susan!
Comment from jenintorre
This is an excellent Haiku. The play on words is very clever. I think this should do really well in the competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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This is an excellent Haiku. The play on words is very clever. I think this should do really well in the competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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I like your positive words about my movie review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I'm not sure a Haiku is meant to rhyme, but I personally love rhyme in all poetry. This one is very amusing and I remember being terrified by the first Jaws movie, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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I'm not sure a Haiku is meant to rhyme, but I personally love rhyme in all poetry. This one is very amusing and I remember being terrified by the first Jaws movie, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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I will always be scared of sharks because of that film.
I'm not sure haiku or senryu are supposed to be fun or humorous either, as the contest suggests entries should be. It should have asked for 5-7-5 entries and not even mentioned haiku or senryu perhaps.
