Perfection Someday
a free style poem10 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
An excellent spiritual message. I like the honest view of the self and the continued yearning to grow in this world but also the confidence in that future perfection, obtained by Christ.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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An excellent spiritual message. I like the honest view of the self and the continued yearning to grow in this world but also the confidence in that future perfection, obtained by Christ.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. I appreciate your comments. F_
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I like your verse for the I Am Not Perfect contest.
You tell of minor flaws and much virtue. I think that's the best any of us can hope to be.
Good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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I like your verse for the I Am Not Perfect contest.
You tell of minor flaws and much virtue. I think that's the best any of us can hope to be.
Good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. I appreciate your comments. F_
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem about a lack of perfection, Perfection Someday, is a self-analysis that weighs a bit heavy on a person who wants to be without flaw, and holds others to that standard. Not a flaw really, but understandably not an ideal outreach frame of mind. Perfection, as you state here, comes one day when others will not matter and you stand perfect before your God.
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This poem about a lack of perfection, Perfection Someday, is a self-analysis that weighs a bit heavy on a person who wants to be without flaw, and holds others to that standard. Not a flaw really, but understandably not an ideal outreach frame of mind. Perfection, as you state here, comes one day when others will not matter and you stand perfect before your God.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. I appreciate your comments. F_
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
In your poem, your truthfulness shines through; that you know your imperfections. Yet you know in your heart your hope of perfection and that you will finally be, in the right place. The introspective calculation that is presented throughout makes it quite an enjoyable read and the picture is well chosen.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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In your poem, your truthfulness shines through; that you know your imperfections. Yet you know in your heart your hope of perfection and that you will finally be, in the right place. The introspective calculation that is presented throughout makes it quite an enjoyable read and the picture is well chosen.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. I appreciate your comments. F_
Comment from Bill Pinder
I like this poem that is written with the humility to admit that you fall short of perfection and are not relying on self righteousness. Your message comes across that you are trusting in God's grace to bridge the gap so that we are accepted by his Holiness.
Bill
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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I like this poem that is written with the humility to admit that you fall short of perfection and are not relying on self righteousness. Your message comes across that you are trusting in God's grace to bridge the gap so that we are accepted by his Holiness.
Bill
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. I appreciate your comments. F_
Comment from the13thpoet
HappyThursday fellow writer. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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HappyThursday fellow writer. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. I appreciate your comments. F_
Comment from brenda bickers
Hi there,
Sometimes words and actions are better left unsaid or acted upon. Knowing when to intervene is a gift that not many posses. Some people are to free with their opinion's and don't mind who they offend by giving them. I would rather have you as a friend than someone who speaks without thinking.
A thought provoking poem, Well done.
Brenda.x
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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Hi there,
Sometimes words and actions are better left unsaid or acted upon. Knowing when to intervene is a gift that not many posses. Some people are to free with their opinion's and don't mind who they offend by giving them. I would rather have you as a friend than someone who speaks without thinking.
A thought provoking poem, Well done.
Brenda.x
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. I appreciate your comments. F_
Comment from JLR
Humility, being honest, and out of ones egoic nature to be always right. Very powerful reminder that someday we will all stand in the light Of true Perfection. I wonder how shallow I will feel at this time? The human condition allows for the struggle to aim toward Perfection which I believe will be met with great appreciation.
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Humility, being honest, and out of ones egoic nature to be always right. Very powerful reminder that someday we will all stand in the light Of true Perfection. I wonder how shallow I will feel at this time? The human condition allows for the struggle to aim toward Perfection which I believe will be met with great appreciation.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. I appreciate your comments. F_
Comment from dragonpoet
No one is perfect. I would think that thinking you are perfect is the sin of pride. This is a prayer everyone should say.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
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No one is perfect. I would think that thinking you are perfect is the sin of pride. This is a prayer everyone should say.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. I appreciate your comments. F_
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your faithful write and your gentle delivery here is honest and truthful, we none of us are perfect and we hope to have a clean slate when we stand before God, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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I enjoyed your faithful write and your gentle delivery here is honest and truthful, we none of us are perfect and we hope to have a clean slate when we stand before God, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. I appreciate your comments. F_
