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Bend Over Smuckatelly

The Big Green Weenie takes on a whole new meaning

31 total reviews 
Comment from royowen
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I don't know what I would do if this happened to me, it's bad enough administering and sticking one's finger in an ant hole, not that I have incidentally Earl, good to see you back my friend, well done, sphincter working well? Well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
    Still working Roy. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
reply by royowen on 29-Oct-2019
    Most welcome
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is an interesting entry for the True Story Flash contest.
True story? Kind of scary, maybe a horror??
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
    It does kind of fits for Halloween doesn't it? I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Bill Pinder
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That is a funny story of dealing with the rectal exam. Nothing like being told to bend over and hear the snap of a glove coming on the hand and waiting for that cold touch of your private parts. Oh well, you know the story.
Bill

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from Sugarray77
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Oh my , Earl... the true story is a hoot and I am glad you entered it into the True Story contest. Army physicians have always been a no nonsense sort. Great read.

Melissa

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work,
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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This is a very cute (and true) flash fiction piece, my friend. I'm glad you are back. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
    Thank you Debbie. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from lyenochka
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Hi Earl! Good to see you back! And it's a Smuckatelly post - as a true story, too. Ah, that poor doctor. Or maybe poor Smuchatelly, too. But he recovered!

" it's own a week " (its)

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
    Thank you very much. I appreciate the grammar pointer.
Comment from Raul1
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It feels like Smuckatelly has experienced a miracle. This is very rare. I like your story. This character is interesting to know about. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
    Thank you very much, I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
reply by Raul1 on 28-Oct-2019
    You're welcome.
Comment from Patty Palmer
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LOL That's pretty funny! I'm presuming that he finally went to the bathroom and moved his bowels? It is funny though! My father-in-law once was really sick and they gave him suppositories to take for nausea because they were afraid that medicine by mouth he would just throw it up. I was at the house and being the nurse in the family, I went in to check on him. He said he was feeling some better but he complained that the medicine the doctor gave him for nausea tasted really terrible! LOL Have a great day!
Patty

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
    You have a funny story too. I guess it's really true, everybody poops. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Ulla
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hahahahaha, Earl. It's good to see you back and you certainly made me smile with this little beauty. I loved it and i wish you the best of luck in the contest. All best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
    Thank you Ulla, I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Rikki66
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I know his feeling since I hit fifty the prostate is checked every two years especially since I have BPH. Thought getting a female doctor would be better. She rams like a jackhammer.
Rikki

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
    Thank you Rikki, I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
reply by Rikki66 on 29-Oct-2019
    Welcome.