Perfection
An Acrostic- Loop Poem16 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a wonderful loop acrostic offering for this contest!! ;) So glad that your perfectionist tendencies allowed you to post it without endless adjustments to the contrary...LOL! ;) :) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls!! ;) :)
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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What a wonderful loop acrostic offering for this contest!! ;) So glad that your perfectionist tendencies allowed you to post it without endless adjustments to the contrary...LOL! ;) :) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls!! ;) :)
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from papa55mike
None of us are perfect; I gave up trying many years ago. What an interesting contest. This acrostic is wonderfully written.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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None of us are perfect; I gave up trying many years ago. What an interesting contest. This acrostic is wonderfully written.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Effective presentation
for your poem.
-I am impressed by
this acrostic loop poem.
-It flows well, and
the description is good.
-I like the opening line
about perfection, and after
all of the issues in between,
the concluding lines makes
for the perfect ending.
-Well done, good luck!
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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-Effective presentation
for your poem.
-I am impressed by
this acrostic loop poem.
-It flows well, and
the description is good.
-I like the opening line
about perfection, and after
all of the issues in between,
the concluding lines makes
for the perfect ending.
-Well done, good luck!
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much
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You are very welcome.
Comment from the13thpoet
A wonderful Wednesday to you fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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A wonderful Wednesday to you fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from JLR
The perfect acrostic verse, meter, rhythms, type face and bold acrostic letters makes this reader enjoy delving back to consume the read twice more, thank you for sharing your talent. Write on and write often!
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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The perfect acrostic verse, meter, rhythms, type face and bold acrostic letters makes this reader enjoy delving back to consume the read twice more, thank you for sharing your talent. Write on and write often!
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Wow! Thank you for your wonderful comments and understanding of this poem
Comment from dragonpoet
This talks of your flaw well and mixes many forms well. It is an acrostic and a loop poem. I like the mirrord refrain for the beginning and end.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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This talks of your flaw well and mixes many forms well. It is an acrostic and a loop poem. I like the mirrord refrain for the beginning and end.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much
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You are most kindly welcome.
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