From Hollowed Sockets
A 5-7-5 poem18 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Wow, this is just horror-filled. Purple and black looms over all. Just eerie times 100! Not even sure what to improve on. Appropriate entry!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Wow, this is just horror-filled. Purple and black looms over all. Just eerie times 100! Not even sure what to improve on. Appropriate entry!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from NickieT
Wow, this poem certainly satisfies the horror prompt nicely. You have created an incredibly vivid picture with your limited syllables. I particularly like the phrase, "hallowed sockets"
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Wow, this poem certainly satisfies the horror prompt nicely. You have created an incredibly vivid picture with your limited syllables. I particularly like the phrase, "hallowed sockets"
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
Perfect contest entry. The creepy image make it even more scary. The font and background worked well. You say so much in a few words. Well done. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. ~Brenda
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Perfect contest entry. The creepy image make it even more scary. The font and background worked well. You say so much in a few words. Well done. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. ~Brenda
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much for your very encouraging review, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello and a terrific Thursday to you Kahpot. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the 5-7-5 form of poem quite well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Hello and a terrific Thursday to you Kahpot. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the 5-7-5 form of poem quite well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Thank you my Friend, I'm glad you liked this one and very much appreciate your review****kahpot
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"From Hollowed Sockets", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With craft and well-honed skill, this talented poet has told it as it is. To me, this is a six, but I'm never given enough of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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"From Hollowed Sockets", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With craft and well-honed skill, this talented poet has told it as it is. To me, this is a six, but I'm never given enough of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much for you wonderful review and comments, always very much appreciated****kahpot
*******kahpot, my friend, as always, you're very welcome.
God bless and take care,
the Duchess !(-_-)!
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
It is so nice that you have honored Dean. Fanstory will never be the same, especially in the horror genre. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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It is so nice that you have honored Dean. Fanstory will never be the same, especially in the horror genre. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Thank you, and yes he will be missed, this (his) horror genre is very challenging, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a grim entry for the 5-7-5 Horror Poem contest.
Your short verse tells a true story of horror.
The red font no black serves to increase the horror.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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This is a grim entry for the 5-7-5 Horror Poem contest.
Your short verse tells a true story of horror.
The red font no black serves to increase the horror.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your very encouraging review and comments, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Excellent. Your poem contains deep meaning. You will do well in the contest with this excellent entry. This may be the winner. Best of luck and other stuff to reach the character counts.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Excellent. Your poem contains deep meaning. You will do well in the contest with this excellent entry. This may be the winner. Best of luck and other stuff to reach the character counts.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Thank you for these very encouraging comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Eeeeeewwwww... Wow, now this one is not only creepy but totally 'creep-thought-provoking'.... your use of the first person approach to such a gory vision truly puts a totally different take on the whole thing...just wow. Especially with that last line...yeah, chills! This should do well in the contest, sir -- thank you for sharing! ;) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Eeeeeewwwww... Wow, now this one is not only creepy but totally 'creep-thought-provoking'.... your use of the first person approach to such a gory vision truly puts a totally different take on the whole thing...just wow. Especially with that last line...yeah, chills! This should do well in the contest, sir -- thank you for sharing! ;) Yvette :)
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Thank you my dear Blonde, high praise is always accepted, it was fun to write horror as I find it quite challenging, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written horror 5-7-5 poem about the image of hollowed sockets and blood flowing down paling cheeks and blindly staining life forever.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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A very well-written horror 5-7-5 poem about the image of hollowed sockets and blood flowing down paling cheeks and blindly staining life forever.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful review, very much appreciated****kahpot
