Pondering
10 word poem3 total reviews
Comment from rhonnie69
CIAO TEMPESTE: Your posting here is highly scriptural. It reminds me of the book of Psalms. "We have rest in our Lord. Only He gives us hope." Psalm 62: verse 5.
"So our hope is in our God Jesus. He is our help, our shield to protect us." Psalm 33: verse 20. To me your posting means that in our sadness he is the hope that shatters all of our stress and brings us joy and happiness. Thank you for sharing this, my friend. God bless you. Ciao...Cordially: rhonnie69.
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CIAO TEMPESTE: Your posting here is highly scriptural. It reminds me of the book of Psalms. "We have rest in our Lord. Only He gives us hope." Psalm 62: verse 5.
"So our hope is in our God Jesus. He is our help, our shield to protect us." Psalm 33: verse 20. To me your posting means that in our sadness he is the hope that shatters all of our stress and brings us joy and happiness. Thank you for sharing this, my friend. God bless you. Ciao...Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
Comment from Alex Rosel
This is a particularly evocative entry for the Under Ten Competition. Most will be able to relate to the scene depicted in the image you've chosen to accompany your poem. The two, poem and picture, are interdependent, and perhaps that's a minor weakness with your poem. But overall, it's a great presentation {smiles}.
Best of luck with this when the voting booth opens {smiles}.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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This is a particularly evocative entry for the Under Ten Competition. Most will be able to relate to the scene depicted in the image you've chosen to accompany your poem. The two, poem and picture, are interdependent, and perhaps that's a minor weakness with your poem. But overall, it's a great presentation {smiles}.
Best of luck with this when the voting booth opens {smiles}.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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I actually was going to use the photo taken from my best friend's house in the contest where you go for a walk , take a photo and write a poem.
I thought the poem was too short so I keep it and the photo for another competition.
So you are right I made a bad choice entering this particular contest with this material.
I have been writing only for 15 months , I still have to learn to alway consider correctly the requirements of each format.
Your input was very helpful.
Thank you for giving me a positive vote despite my lack in interpreting well the format.
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Thumbs up.
That's only my opinion. Good luck when the voting booth opens.
Comment from dragonpoet
Their is always hope in the darkest moments. This gives the idea that the end of the days darkness is ended by the hope of the sunrise of the following day.
Good luck with the prompt.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Their is always hope in the darkest moments. This gives the idea that the end of the days darkness is ended by the hope of the sunrise of the following day.
Good luck with the prompt.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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This photo was taken in sept.. seeing the contrast between the dark in the foreground and honey hues behind made me think of that concept.
Thank you for reviewing my short poem.
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You are a good photogragpher as a well.
You're welcome.
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