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I Have A Flaw? Really? Who Knew?

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Comment from Mimi Linny
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Painting a perfect picture of the flaws of a married man! LOL! Would say that it was too funny for words, but your description paints the words with a barrel of laughs! Love it! And much luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
    Making a lady laugh just makes my day. It is sweet solace for my tears of 42 years. My wife has assigned numbers to my transgressions to save time. She can now list them all for the day during one HGTV commercial break. My dog loves me...
reply by Mimi Linny on 26-Oct-2019
    Still chuckling! LOL! Have a grand day!
Comment from Elaine Chiodi
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This is a really funny description of so many typical complaints wives have with hubbys. Your last two lines sum up the reality of relationships: focus is different, but patience endures... ...ec

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019

    After 42 years of marriage, we have the complaints numbered. Saves time. Glad I made you laugh. Thanks for reading and writing to me.
reply by Elaine Chiodi on 26-Oct-2019
    You're welcome... ...ec
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello author
Read what your flaw was its seems like you don't have patience either is your wife according to what you said

Men are impatient most with things outside their own house,
While my wife's impatience seems just focused on me...

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
    Thanks for reading and writing. Hope it made you laugh. After 42 years of marriage, we have her complaints numbered. Saves time.
Comment from Cindy Warren
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You mean you're supposed to put those caps back on toothpaste tubes? I'm sure you have no flaws at all. You're required by law to get frustrated and swear at idiot drivers, especially during rush hour. LOL Thanks for a fun read.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    I should have married you. You understand. You are kind. You see the humor in life. Thank you for readin' my poem and for a great review!
Comment from JudyE
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Haha. I think many of us would only have to ask our spouse if we couldn't think of any personal flaws! I picked up a typo - Toilet sets left up - I think it should probably be 'toilet seats'. Good luck in the contest. It's a great poem.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    Bless you for a great review and for pointing out my typo. I have corrected it, but still have not plead guilty to all my wife has detailed. I tell her, "Good men are hard to find" and she answers, after 42 years, "I'm still looking". Life is good. Thanks again. God Bless
reply by JudyE on 21-Oct-2019
    I am just a bit older than my husband and I tell people I married a toyboy but something went amiss along the way. lol But I wouldn't swap him. :)
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    Good fun! I often say about my wife of 42 years, "She was so much younger when I married her!" I think some humor is the glue that holds marriages together.
Comment from Raul1
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This poem is very humorous. I think that this poem has a chance of winning the contest! It is very easy to read and understand. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    Making you laugh is THE win that means most. Thanks for letting me know. I've enjoyed married life these 40 plus years, but when our preacher said, "and, you will be together in Heaven" to which I asked, "Is that negotiable?" Thanks for a great review!
reply by Raul1 on 21-Oct-2019
    You're welcome.