Let Them Flow...
An 'Under Ten Competition' Entry14 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
Great artwork choice for presentation. This short poem had astounding visual imagery. Emotions handled at best are tears on the pillow. Well thought out. Nicely written. Excellent work :)
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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Great artwork choice for presentation. This short poem had astounding visual imagery. Emotions handled at best are tears on the pillow. Well thought out. Nicely written. Excellent work :)
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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Thanx for your review on this one, Sunni! ;) :) Always appreciated! ;)
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yvette,
Leonardo was one fine poet and painter! Your under ten verse accomplished a lot of meaning. Disappointment or failure may bring tears, but 'if it is not fatal, it is no big deal!' The funny corollary, which is not my original either, is "If it is fatal, it makes no difference!"
Thanks for my peek today.
Please consider raising the font size for these short verses. IMHO it raises the FS viewer appeal.
Mark
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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Yvette,
Leonardo was one fine poet and painter! Your under ten verse accomplished a lot of meaning. Disappointment or failure may bring tears, but 'if it is not fatal, it is no big deal!' The funny corollary, which is not my original either, is "If it is fatal, it makes no difference!"
Thanks for my peek today.
Please consider raising the font size for these short verses. IMHO it raises the FS viewer appeal.
Mark
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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Thanx for your review on this one, Mark! ;) :) Always appreciated! ;)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about tears that flow from your eyes will cleanse the heart and mind from all the built up pain and stress we carry around that wear us down.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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A very well-written poem about tears that flow from your eyes will cleanse the heart and mind from all the built up pain and stress we carry around that wear us down.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Thank you!!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. Your perspective of tears from the heart is very interesting. You have another interesting concept at bleeding from the heart in a physical way can be fatal but we can recover from a broken heart or tears from the heart. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Hello mystery writer. Your perspective of tears from the heart is very interesting. You have another interesting concept at bleeding from the heart in a physical way can be fatal but we can recover from a broken heart or tears from the heart. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your review!!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Under Ten Competition.
You tell a clear story with emotion in only 9 words.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Under Ten Competition.
You tell a clear story with emotion in only 9 words.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Thank you!!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You really have said something profound in your few words. Keeping feelings inside, letting them build and build without expressing them in some way can be dangerous. Crying is cathartic.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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You really have said something profound in your few words. Keeping feelings inside, letting them build and build without expressing them in some way can be dangerous. Crying is cathartic.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your encouraging review -- tears are a wonderful pressure-release valve, aren't they?
Comment from NickieT
I love this entry. It is a romantic take on the human anatomy - which I believe places sadness in an appropriately dramatic form. Best of luck with this entry!
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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I love this entry. It is a romantic take on the human anatomy - which I believe places sadness in an appropriately dramatic form. Best of luck with this entry!
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your review. I am so glad you enjoyed!
Comment from Reese Turner
You make a very touching point in a very few words. How true. It also implies that we men who try so hard not to cry are actually plugging the relief valve for pain. I shall remember that. Thanks
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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You make a very touching point in a very few words. How true. It also implies that we men who try so hard not to cry are actually plugging the relief valve for pain. I shall remember that. Thanks
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Thank you so very much for this thoughtful review, Reese! Good to hear from you!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Poignant clever words here and this painting is amazing and Leonardo was the cleverest man that ever lived. Your under ten is unique and enjoyable and a good entry for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Poignant clever words here and this painting is amazing and Leonardo was the cleverest man that ever lived. Your under ten is unique and enjoyable and a good entry for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Thank you so very much for your thoughtful review! And, oh yeah! Leonardo ROCKED!!
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I had never thought of tears that way, but they do come from the heart. A great pairing of artwork and poem. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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I had never thought of tears that way, but they do come from the heart. A great pairing of artwork and poem. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Thank you so very much for your thoughtful review - glad you enjoyed!!
