Look out!
A war zone13 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Unfortunately war takes away all those delicate social graces that we pride ourselves on and the reality can destroy us. Many innocent people fall in these circumstances, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Unfortunately war takes away all those delicate social graces that we pride ourselves on and the reality can destroy us. Many innocent people fall in these circumstances, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Thanks Dolly. X
Comment from Raul1
I think that this poem has a very good chance of winning the contest! I like the humor in this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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I think that this poem has a very good chance of winning the contest! I like the humor in this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Many thanks Raul.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Cindy Warren
I never would have thought to rhyme 'war on' with 'moron.' It works. And if I saw that gun, I'd be running for cover pretty quick. I'm no moron. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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I never would have thought to rhyme 'war on' with 'moron.' It works. And if I saw that gun, I'd be running for cover pretty quick. I'm no moron. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Many thanks Cindy.
